Kiss and Tell

Kiss and Tell

 

I’m becoming picky

I’ve been there and done that

My patience is running low

It doesn’t take much to tick me off

 

I know what I like and what I don’t

You can do little things that make me want to blow up

You’re walking on eggshells around me

Walking on a river of ice

Not sure if your next step will cause you

To go under

 

It’s all new for you

You have a clean plate

But mine has bits and pieces of leftovers on it

And I don’t need anyone adding to it

 

Some say it’s better to be with someone who knows what they want

Someone with experience

But what if that experience caused you to have a short fuse

And not accept things one with less experience would normally accept

 

Some say it’s better to tell someone what’s on your mind

Tell them of their mistakes so they don’t repeat them

If I were to tell you of every single little thing you do that I don’t like

You wouldn’t be around anymore

 

I’m picky

I’m temperamental

I have mood swings

I’m impatient

But I’m honest

And if you’d ask me, I’d tell you

 

Notice it, and ask me

 

I’ll tell you  

Author's Note

I haven't been writing as often, maybe it's writers block, maybe it's a lack of inspiration, maybe it's just laziness.

I don't think everyone will understand this poem, I'd be shocked if more than 1 person does.

Notice 'it' = notice when I'm getting ticked off and slamming up my walls.

Enjoy

Reviews

[Leigh]

You have expressed several emotions very well, tell me if i am wrong, but it sounds like you are explaining the more detailed parts of your personality to someone you might be close to? Some of it is a bit fragmented and a bit harder to relate to, but that doesn't matter at all. A good write which I much enjoyed

[Destinyxi]

Yeah it is for someone im close to. Thank you so much for your review

[gombeggar]

well yer making an expression, that's good...sometimes just writing whatever gets things flowing again...but it's not as if this is wasted effort...not by any means

[Destinyxi]

Thanks gom :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to know the woman. Good to be picky. Cheap and useless things lead us to no-where. I like the thoughts and the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Destinyxi]

Thanks Coyote, you're right.

[Baby Ricochet]

Groovy baby.

[Destinyxi]

haha thanks

[Frieda P]

ha after reading this, I think we're related! You didn't have to explain 'it', IT was pretty damn clear! Love a good rant of a poem....nice one. :-)

[Destinyxi]

Haha, I guess I explained it for the other readers. I'm glad you understood what it was :)

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Well ... want to be my friend? ahahah
I think it's so fun to be friend with people like you :) A great friend of mine, a sister, for me, is exactly like that, she fit all the verses perfectly !!

[Destinyxi]

haha, you have to get to know a person before you can be their friend. Glad you liked the poem :)

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Well, want to get to know me? ahahah