Desired Wall

Desired Wall

 

You’d look so good on my wall

Your back pressed tight

Every inch of your hard body exposed

My

You are quite bigger than me

Ah

But I’m quite wittier than you

 

I know how to please

Every inch of you

Make your body sing out

For more

 

I know how to make your flesh

Drip that salty liquid

And tempt me to follow the trail

With my very tongue

 

I know all about you

Your wants and your needs

What you crave and what you demand

I know what makes you feel good

And I know what makes you feel better

 

You talk big

But I act big

 

You’re a great collection

To the pictures on my wall

Stay right there

And let me just get

One

Good

Look at you

 

Then when I’m done looking

I’ll memorise the texture of you

Trace my fingers along the peachy colors

Trace my fingers along every bump and dent

 

You’re imprinted in my mind

And I feel you on my fingertips

 

How long can you stay there

Pressed against my wall

Allowing me the pleasure of you

 

And I want it

I need it

I crave it

And hell

I demand it

 

I know

You’ll make me feel good

And I know

You’ll make me feel better

Author's Note

Semi-erotic poem. Not much said.

4 hours of studying, needed a break. Wrote this poem as a sort of relieving of tension.

Enjoy!

Reviews

[That_Girl]

I'd love to decorate my walls with sexy men. ;) This one made me smile the entire way through... ohhh the mental images! Well anyways, lovely piece, Kels! Always nice to see a new one, even if it's due to John's impatience (not that this one was... just making a point *cough*) ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You should study more! this is so lovely and sensual and longing. Hope it helped with the tension.

[Destinyxi]

I'll be studying for the next 3 days then NADA for a month haha.

Thanks for your review!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Then enjoy!

[kublakhan27]

It's good you mentioned that cuz I was gonna say this is not the product of a girl who should be preparing for exams LOL I read all of your pieces slowly but it took me several minutes to get this one to sink in...I'm thoroughly intrigued by this one...I can't really top John's explanation beyond that, he got it spot on :)

[Destinyxi]

Glad I can intrigue you Steven xD After I wrote this poem, I stopped studying for the night haha.read moreGlad I can intrigue you Steven xD After I wrote this poem, I stopped studying for the night haha.

Thanks for your review!

[kublakhan27]

Oh you know you do Kels haha ;) And thank you for writing it...I hope the studying goes better today, I would have had to call it a night too after that :P

[Baby Ricochet]

Ooooooooh

[Destinyxi]

:P

[Jibey]

I thought it was a good and novel idea a- the lover pinned to the wall and being forced to submit to the viewer's desires... Definitely the thoughts of one who likes to be in control and definitely erotic! Nicely ambiguous too - for the one pinned to the wall could be either male or female... I enjoyed the strength of this writing...and the vision it created!

[Destinyxi]

I didn't notice it was ambiguous, that's great though haha.

Thanks for your review Jibey!

[John Stussy]

Woooo, new piece from Kelsia! :D As always I did in fact enjoy your words. Glad you got bored of studying so you could make this piece, was a nice, sensual read. Was quite descriptive, and I'm sure the dude would be easily convinced to meet all your demands, though I doubt he'd have much of a choice. Awesomely penned poem.

[Destinyxi]

Yes, finally a new piece :P

Glad you liked it John :)