Desired Wall

Desired Wall

 

You’d look so good on my wall

Your back pressed tight

Every inch of your hard body exposed

My

You are quite bigger than me

Ah

But I’m quite wittier than you

 

I know how to please

Every inch of you

Make your body sing out

For more

 

I know how to make your flesh

Drip that salty liquid

And tempt me to follow the trail

With my very tongue

 

I know all about you

Your wants and your needs

What you crave and what you demand

I know what makes you feel good

And I know what makes you feel better

 

You talk big

But I act big

 

You’re a great collection

To the pictures on my wall

Stay right there

And let me just get

One

Good

Look at you

 

Then when I’m done looking

I’ll memorise the texture of you

Trace my fingers along the peachy colors

Trace my fingers along every bump and dent

 

You’re imprinted in my mind

And I feel you on my fingertips

 

How long can you stay there

Pressed against my wall

Allowing me the pleasure of you

 

And I want it

I need it

I crave it

And hell

I demand it

 

I know

You’ll make me feel good

And I know

You’ll make me feel better

Author's Note

Semi-erotic poem. Not much said.

4 hours of studying, needed a break. Wrote this poem as a sort of relieving of tension.

Enjoy!

Reviews

[That_Girl]

I'd love to decorate my walls with sexy men. ;) This one made me smile the entire way through... ohhh the mental images! Well anyways, lovely piece, Kels! Always nice to see a new one, even if it's due to John's impatience (not that this one was... just making a point *cough*) ;)

[Patrick Henry]

Is this a poem about masturbating to a picture from a magazine... like "Men's Health"? There is a lot of lust, salt, and bumps in your poem. : ) Guys like pictures on their wall, but our moms shudder and anger at the thought of very conveniently placed holes in the posters!! lol xoxo -Mark

[Destinyxi]

oh god no, hahaha. this is about having a guy leaning on your wall xD an actual guy, not a picture

[Patrick Henry]

lol I thought it was a picture.... and "cute". It didn't have a mature tag talking about the licking, seducing, arousal, being wet "you or him", and thought it to be just a crush or a picture you fancied. : ) xoxo -mark

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Your desire is overwhelming and a good release of stress from studying. ha Any man would be flattered to hear these words, nice writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. A nice wandering of the mind during your study break. Nice to find places where we are in control and life is very good. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[B-poet]

Very bold, catchy, and slightly provocative. You've displayed very well what is clearly the apple of your eye within the context of your poem. Great job. I very worthwhile read. :)

[Christopher Booyakasha]

ooooooo! nice
very flirty and original!
cool cool

[Hester Vane]

Sexy Picture + Sexy Poem = :-)

Great Stuff once again!

[Ban Heo]

haha wow, I was reading this and thinking "you know, this is a pretty typical sexual desire poem and then...BOOM last stanza. "I know / you'll make me feel good / and I know / You'll make me feel better" So awesome. That last stanza does so much work in this poem I am so jealous. You can write a whole separate work around that one stanza alone. Great!

[Invisible]

semi-erotic? i think this should be rated teen at best, but hey, that's me. b.t.b, i don't think it's that difficult to get a man's attention or please him, i'm just saying.

[gombeggar]

full of wanton desire, huh? ;) nice expression...funny how the mind can fall on to images

[gombeggar]

ohh, and good title too