Getaway

Getaway

A Poem by Destinyxi

Getaway

 

Aw you’re good for something

Yeah, you’re good for something alright

What you’re good for

What I need you for

It isn’t important

 

You’re not long term material

Not at all

You’re just a good release

A good escape

 

You make me feel good

You make my body hum

But my heart is out of this

Utterly and completely

 

You’re around for hours at a time

And that’s all I need you for

You’re good at being used

You’re good at doing

What I can’t do myself

But for everything else

I don’t need you

Or anyone

 

You come around when I ask

And I don’t need to ask you

To leave

You just do

And that’s fine

Because I don’t want you to

Overstay your welcome

 

I don’t need to know your name

I don’t need to know your number

I just need to know

When and where

And I’m there

Ready

For just a few hours

Of an escape 


You’re my getaway car

I hop right on you

And ride you out of town

The only time I stop

Is when you run out of gas

And even then

I don’t really care

Because I’m far away

From my responsibilities

Far away

From my home

 

I need you

And I use you

As a distraction

From who I am

And where I have to be

And all the things I have to do

You’re just the first on my list 

© 2012 Destinyxi


Author's Note

Destinyxi
Going to leave the rating to teen because I don't bluntly state anything.

I haven't written an erotic poem in awhile (though this is far from a hardcore erotica)

Enjoy!

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You used to write sexy now you write sexist, I"m offended! haha

Posted 12 Years Ago


Michael Thrower

12 Years Ago

It's true
Michael Thrower

12 Years Ago

;)
That_Guy

12 Years Ago

I'm far to likable haha
certainly very deviant and integrally manipulative in nature...really got my blood going good read :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Destinyxi

12 Years Ago

Thank you!
I always been lead to believe that only guys wrote this kind of stuff, which is exactly why it warms my heart so much to see that you have these kinds of stories in you...it makes me feel not as guilty for being born male...actually all gender issues aside, I'm just impressed that you have the courage to compose such things...good luck trying to remember ever reading something of this nature by me...I'm a sheep...then again I'd probably just get heat anyway so maybe it all works out in the end :P Good job Kels :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

You've just been answered, but not here :P
Destinyxi

12 Years Ago

Haha yeah I commented on here before I noticed my messages.
kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

That's okay, I was probably a minute or two late with it haha
"You’re my getaway car
I hop right on you
And ride you out of town"

So do it already ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kaylor Mason

12 Years Ago

I'd love to be part of that emperiment . . . it should be done ya know, in the name of science :)
Kaylor Mason

12 Years Ago

[experiment]--sorry
Destinyxi

12 Years Ago

Aha right, in the name of science
Destinyxi this is cold and calculating and a really good read. Such a base idea to detach from emotion and simply take the physical for yourself. well portrayed!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Destinyxi

12 Years Ago

haha, at first I thought you were going to criticize the poem :P glad you didn't!
Nicely done

Posted 12 Years Ago


Destinyxi

12 Years Ago

Thanks =D
I did enjoy this, good little ride you took your readers on. Even without going into full-on erotica you awoke images of fast-paced desire, escape and freedom from the trappings that go with the ol' ball-n-chain of relationships. Great work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Destinyxi

12 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
John Stussy

12 Years Ago

No problem. :)

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