Getaway

Getaway

 

Aw you’re good for something

Yeah, you’re good for something alright

What you’re good for

What I need you for

It isn’t important

 

You’re not long term material

Not at all

You’re just a good release

A good escape

 

You make me feel good

You make my body hum

But my heart is out of this

Utterly and completely

 

You’re around for hours at a time

And that’s all I need you for

You’re good at being used

You’re good at doing

What I can’t do myself

But for everything else

I don’t need you

Or anyone

 

You come around when I ask

And I don’t need to ask you

To leave

You just do

And that’s fine

Because I don’t want you to

Overstay your welcome

 

I don’t need to know your name

I don’t need to know your number

I just need to know

When and where

And I’m there

Ready

For just a few hours

Of an escape 

You’re my getaway car

I hop right on you

And ride you out of town

The only time I stop

Is when you run out of gas

And even then

I don’t really care

Because I’m far away

From my responsibilities

Far away

From my home

 

I need you

And I use you

As a distraction

From who I am

And where I have to be

And all the things I have to do

You’re just the first on my list 

Author's Note

Going to leave the rating to teen because I don't bluntly state anything.

I haven't written an erotic poem in awhile (though this is far from a hardcore erotica)

Enjoy!

Reviews

[de_maruf]

yea nice

[khalid]

i feel conflict here between the need for the person and the need to let them go away. i want to say that nobody is perfect, we cant get our partner as perfect as we want because we dont create them, we have to either accept them with both their advantages and disadvantages or we have to leave them..

it is a really nicely penned poem..

[Kes]

"You're in the wrong place
You're on the back page.
You're in the getaway... car."
Placebo - You Don't Care About Us

This poem reminded me of that song. Not that I'm saying you don't care about anyone! The vocalist actually wrote the lyrics to himself. Just an interesting bit of trivia.
Anyway, this is fab. :) I wish I knew someone like this! lol
Keep it up! As always.
K

[Johnny Joe]

Nice!!

[soliloquy]

This sounds really nice.....

Very pleasant.

[Destinyxi]

Haha thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

A PG poem. This is good poetry. Allow the imagination to create visions and thoughts. I believe sometime people use too much detail. A good writer make the reader want to know more. No weakness in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Destinyxi]

Yeah, I didn't think it was R, it doesn't state anything. Thank you Coyote :)

[That_Girl]

Finally someone that gets it. :D Sex can in fact be just sex. Plus, you're obviously not using anyone in this poem if he leaves without any questions asked, yeah? ;)

Loved this! So sassy!

[Destinyxi]

Yes! At least you get it! Hmph. Thanks Avy! :)

[gombeggar]

hmm...i feel kinda used just reading this ;)

[Destinyxi]

Haha, don't worry you're not the one being used

[Ees]

ahhh.
you are so harsh sometimes. haha, like a person can be used and the rest doesn't matter. haha.

favorite part:
"And I don’t need to ask you
To leave
You just do"

Good job

[Destinyxi]

Haha, not harsh, just honest :)

Thanks Ees

[Baby Ricochet]

That's what I keep saying

[Destinyxi]

Shhhh Ricochet