Falling Heaven

Falling Heaven

A Poem by Destinyxi

Falling Heaven

 

You wanted to make a bet

The person who falls first

Loses

 

Let me suck in my pride

And admit

I lost

 

I fell for you

I’m still falling for you

And you just don’t have a clue

 

I act the way you do

All tough and emotionless

But inside there are butterfly wings

Whispering against my stomach

Every time I see you

 

I don’t know how long

I can keep up this act

I don’t know how long

I can mirror your actions

 

It’s killing me inside

Watching you with others

It’s killing me inside

Being without you

 

I just don’t know what to do

I don’t know what to say

I don’t know how to be

If not with you

 

You beat me

My darling

You won

I lost

Your prize is my heart

My prize is ridding of it

So you can’t hurt me

Because you will hurt me

I know that much

And I’ll let you

To experience just a bit

Of paradise 

© 2012 Destinyxi


Author's Note

Destinyxi
Honestly, writing this poem could have been the last thing I've ever done. Right after I finished writing it, we had an earthquake that I think scraped off 5 years of my life x.x

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What an interesting poem to have as what could have been your last...
The poem is beautiful, with a twist that I didn't expect.
Well done

Koodoos

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's a terrible thing to feel unwanted. So much thought in this one, almost like a riddle. I liked this line: You wanted to make a bet
The person who falls first
Loses

Let me suck in my pride
And admit
I lost

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is a very nice and deep poem hope you didnt get hurt in the earthquake

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your poem is true about life. Must know pain and pleasure to test love. love is hard to find and maintain. I enjoyed your thoughts and the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


The pains of loving, and not being loved back. A greta poem, full of emotion, sadness, and heartbreak. Great job
100/100


Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a good piece. I enjoyed it. It speaksbto the pained heeart. Good job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem is amazing because it captures the defeat of love and the longing for someone. The last stanza is amazing! Beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


To welcome pain to be loved is the question at the end of this poem. You've conveyed that brillantly. I wonder why though people will love someone that hurts them emotionally and mentally. Whatever strengthens this type of attraction is the million dollar question. Great poem. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice romantic poem... full of passion and love... a good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


alot of love and passion feelings mixed with some pain and disappointment but frankly it is really nicely penned

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 10, 2012
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Destinyxi
Destinyxi

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