Dripping Petals

Strong language used

Dripping Petals

 

Are you lying to me?

Or am I lying to you?

Who’s lying to who?

 

I can’t take the bullshit

I can’t take any of it

You got something to say?

Say it to my damn face

 

You’re unsure of where were going

That’s fine

So am I

But don’t slap me in the face

And tell me you don’t know

Because I know

Oh, I know

I know it’s all a game

Checkmate b***h

I’m going to win

 

You think I’m going to be embarrassed

From showing you my body

Showing you what I’ve got

Flaunting it

Ah, babe

I saw your stuff too

And let me tell you

I’ve seen better

 

 

I can’t befriend your friends

You’re scared we won’t work out

Aw honey

We will work out all right

I’ll work you out till you’re f*****g dust

Gonna shove a stake through your heart

Pull it out

Meaningless pile of dusted vamp

Gonna slay the hell out of you

And every other blood sucking mother f****r

Who crosses my path

 

I’ll tell you if it’s going to work out

I’ll tell you if it’ll last

It’s all up to me, dick

All up to me

 

Try to hurt me with your words

I’ve got mine mastered

Want to mess with a writer?

Come at me, prick

I’ll cut you up with words

Then I’ll hammer your leftovers

You’re going to blend into the ground

Fertilizer for my flowers

 

Red

Dripping

Prickly

Roses

 

Ah, babe, don’t you like my garden? 

Author's Note

I know it's my second 'grrr' poem in 2 days, if I get repetitive, please let me know guys.

I had to write another poem, got angry, needed to vent. (Wanted to share it with you guys as well)

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

How in the world did I let this one go for so long without a comment? This is great...it can be shouted out, hissed out, giggled out, etc. haha...and I love the last line to death...I don't know if it's the "Ah" or the italicized garden or what but that's without question my favourite closing line from you...well done Kels :)

[Destinyxi]

Haha i forgot about this one. was awesome to read after these months :p

[kublakhan27]

Good thing I pointed it out huh lol ;P

[Destinyxi]

Mhm thank you :p

[kublakhan27]

:)

[Coyote Poetry]

"Try to hurt me with your words
I’ve got mine mastered
Want to mess with a writer?
Come at me, prick
I’ll cut you up with words"
This is good poetry. I like the directness of your words. I tell people. Nothing good to say. Say nothing. Negative lead us to trouble waters. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Then I’ll hammer your leftovers

[soliloquy]

I love the spirit!! You got attitude babe.

[khalid]

it is nice to have the courage to share what you feel but i think you would better reduce the anger you show..nothing deserves lol

[Lina Grey]

I think it was funny. Especially the ending. Though you could have a bit more creativity in your word choice, but it's very powerful and definitely shows off your skill. This is one for my favorites, love. Thank you.

[Ees]

Not bad, not my favorite work of yours. You are deff skilled at writing pissed off (and I mean this with all due respect) b***h poetry. The choices of your words got just a little redundant in this one. That said, if I didn't know you've written better I'd prob say that this was amazing, haha, weird how exceptions get us, huh. It's strong, as all your work, that's for sure.

my favorite line:
"Come at me, prick"- God, that's awesome!!!

[Androglossia]

Unless it’s mad, passionate, extraordinary love, it’s a waste of your time. There is no wrong or write in poetry. If this is all coming from a personal experience then you have a good way of venting out.

[de_maruf]

oh ho nice imaginary one

[J. Viands]

I get the needing to vent and the message here is clear but I find sometimes when an emotion like anger is to strong it clouds our judgment when it comes to our word usage (and I’m not just talking about profanity) yet on the other hand sometimes it comes out as jagged as we planed

[That_Guy]

Nice imagery. just let me know if I ever drift to your darkside, I'll quickly apologize ;)