Sliding Ribbon

Sliding Ribbon

 

My head is pounding

You want to get out

You’re punching at the walls

Of my oversensitive mind

 

My eyes are closing

The pain is too much to bear

You’re so relentless

Scratching and clawing

 

My hands are trembling

I’d drag you out if I could

You do me no good

You do yourself no good

 

My heart is pumping

You’re making me anxious

I want you to get out

Get out of my thoughts

 

You slide your way

Through the ribbons

Of my ideas

Looking through the windows

Of my mind

The windows

That show you my insides

You find yourself at the bottom

Of this long, swirling slide

Right to the place between my eyes

So you roll my eyes backwards

And roll yourself out

You roll yourself free

Out of my thoughts

But taking the glimpses

Of my insides with you

 

My head is pounding

And my eyes are hurting

My hands are shaking

And my heart is thumping

You’re never getting back in

It never did me any good

And it never did you any good

Author's Note

So, I have a headache, and to get rid of the headache, I wrote this poem. It's a bit..unusual. I don't know what I was trying to get at.

But, as usual, I'm sharing it with you guys :)
You know the drill, let me know what you think! (so I don't feel like a complete weirdo)

Oh, and check out the picture, it's pretty

Reviews

[Soul Fire]

Very interesting,raw ,emotional,powerful

[Destinyxi]

thank you!

[That_Guy]

"I’d drag you out of I could" if?

I like it, I'm sure most of us have been there ready to claw our own eyes out to escape the pressure and pain

[Destinyxi]

woops, I blame that on the headache. I corrected it. Thank you.

[That_Guy]

a just excuse no doubt ;)

[That_Guy]

I hope you're feeling better now

[Destinyxi]

I am, thank you =D

[That_Guy]

Good ;)