Pumping Pink

Pumping Pink

 

Pink, soft, lips

Like the petals of a flower

Kissing its way down your curves

Down your masculinity

Down your body

So unlike my own

 

Lush, pale, lips

Claiming your flesh

Taking over your mind

Your thoughts are only filled

With the scent of nature

 

Strawberry kisses

Light touches

Humming lullaby

The sound of blooming flowers

Something new

Something fresh

The beginning to an old end

 

And I’ve kissed those lips

A million times

Our touching pink lips

Forming a shape of a heart

Our heart

Whole and complete

Beating

Breathing

Pumping

Thumping

Ba boom

Ba boom

 

Beating faster now that it’s lasting

Our pink, lush, pale lips

Teasing and feeding

Our full, throbbing hearts

Alive and beating

 

Ba boom

Ba boom

Author's Note

I made this poem for a contest :)

We had to write a poem about the image (seen above!)

Reviews

[Soul Fire]

Very lovely!

[Sirius King]

very nice and descriptive... i think im a fan lol
Ba boom
Ba boom
;-)

[Destinyxi]

Haha, glad you liked the poem :)

[afra]

so beautiful ....i love every single line of it .....one of ur best i think ...well done

[Destinyxi]

Thank you afra! Glad you liked it

[gombeggar]

ahh...well that is quite an expression grown out of picture of a flower...nicely done, girl

[Destinyxi]

Haha was pretty random to write about love and kisses just from a picture of a flower. Thanks for the review!

[gombeggar]

not so random when u think about it...the flower has a very sex oriented connotation after all

[John Stussy]

You just keep out-doing yourself with each new piece you write! The wistful tone of this poem made for a great beginning, setting the tone for the longing throughout, and the memory of the last half. Your imagery was perfect, from the allusions to nature and flowers with the shaping of lips up to the kisses meeting, forming into the tenderly, passionately beating heart of a love so strong it burned itself into memory. Great work, as always. I would say keep it up, but you just keep getting better and better.

[Destinyxi]

aww, thank you John :) I'm glad you liked it!

[John Stussy]

Liking your work comes easily with how well you write. :) So thank you, for sharing your work with all of us!

[Kes]

This is amazing. I really liked the last bit:

"Beating faster now that it's lasting
Our pink, lush, pale lips
Teasing and feeding
Our full, throbbing hearts
Alive and beating"

And of course the Ba-boom was a nice touch! Every part of this is gentle seduction and I love it. :)
K

[Destinyxi]

I'm so glad you liked it Kes! The ba boom was pretty random, felt like adding it in lol

[That_Girl]

Damn girl! Good luck with the contest... not that you'll need any luck. This was glorious! I loved every word of it.

"Beating faster now that it’s lasting

Our pink, lush, pale lips

Teasing and feeding

Our full, throbbing hearts

Alive and beating" Niiiice. Beautiful!

[Destinyxi]

Thank you Avy! I'm glad you liked it. I was afraid that last stanza was a bit repetitive x.x

[That_Girl]

Nahh the repetition worked really well. :D

[That_Guy]

i totally giggled at Ba Boom, and I'm not a giggler. lol

very fitting, very fun. Very good job

[Destinyxi]

Giggled huh? That's interesting :P Glad you liked the poem =D

[That_Guy]

maybe lol

[Jolie Blossom]

Ooooh i REALLY liked this. :) Wasn't sure what it would be about by reading the title but adter reading it, it fits perfectly and I love the last stanza. :) Good luck!

[Destinyxi]

Haha I don't know where I got the title from, just came to mind. Wanted another word for beating hearts xD

Thank you!

[Crazy Cat Man]

Ba boom. That's how I felt when reading this poem. Great job.

[Destinyxi]

I hope that's a good thing haha, I'm glad you liked it!

[Crazy Cat Man]

Of course its a good thing. I love the journy of this sensual story. So subtle and tasteful :)