Pumping Pink

Pumping Pink

 

Pink, soft, lips

Like the petals of a flower

Kissing its way down your curves

Down your masculinity

Down your body

So unlike my own

 

Lush, pale, lips

Claiming your flesh

Taking over your mind

Your thoughts are only filled

With the scent of nature

 

Strawberry kisses

Light touches

Humming lullaby

The sound of blooming flowers

Something new

Something fresh

The beginning to an old end

 

And I’ve kissed those lips

A million times

Our touching pink lips

Forming a shape of a heart

Our heart

Whole and complete

Beating

Breathing

Pumping

Thumping

Ba boom

Ba boom

 

Beating faster now that it’s lasting

Our pink, lush, pale lips

Teasing and feeding

Our full, throbbing hearts

Alive and beating

 

Ba boom

Ba boom

Author's Note

I made this poem for a contest :)

We had to write a poem about the image (seen above!)

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

ba boom. or ba, ba, ba boom! Very raunchy!

[Destinyxi]

haha, thank you :P

[Wakeofahero]

Wow this was pretty dang hot I'll be honest. I like the whole thing, especially the part when it says kissing down the curves of your body. Niceeeee lol. Favoriting :)!

[Destinyxi]

haha, most of my recent work is 'hot'. I'm becoming more.. what's the word.. gutsy? Or blunt.. or open.. bleh school is tiring me out xD

Glad you liked it though! And favorited it!

[Androglossia]

Kisses, like butterfly wings touching the petal of a flower is an absolute perfection. So powerful that it can corrupt the strongest of the minds. I like your reference to the flower and strawberry, it's so delicate yet there's something provocative about it. You have the skill to convey simple text into emotion. I like this, this is going to my favorite. Thank you for sharing.

[Destinyxi]

aww thank you for favoriting! I'm glad you liked my poem :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. You did very well with the photo. A very strong description and I like the use of the words "Ba boom, Ba boom." Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Hester Vane]

Well done again! You've manage to sneak in some of your more sexy writing into this poem and i like! I think its a very interesting way to interpret the picture! How did you do in the contest? I hope you won! :-)

[axel]

aha, good poem , narrative and good

[Joe Morris]

I think it is clever the way in which you have used the words 'ba-boom' in a more frequent manner as the poem progresses as a metaphor for the act of love making. Very nice write :)

[kublakhan27]

Intense^^

[Jordan A. Wilson]

Nice work. As I read further and further, the beating heart references gave the piece a sense of urgency. I don't know if that was your intention but it worked nicely.