The Lady is the Tramp

The Lady is the Tramp

 

She’s a first class player

She knows her strengths

And strengthens her weaknesses

She never looks back

Never turns her head to see what she passed

She’s always moving straight

Forward

Never stopping

 

They fall for her

Like flies to a candle

The light so bright

So tempting

They don’t think

They just do

 

She drags them around

On their tight leashes

And they pant and wag their tails

So eager to please

Happy to just see her

Little do they know

How many dogs she pets

 

They never misbehave

Always listening and obeying

Such good little boys

Always getting their treats

And when she leaves

They whimper and complain

Such clingy little boys

Never getting their way

 

She’s a first class player

She knows what she wants

And she just takes it

No rules

No regulations

Just her needs and desires

Being satisfied 

Reviews

[axel]

she is a first class mother,lol,nice poem, its mothers day on writerscafe.org, cheers

[Destinyxi]

Is it? Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it!

[kublakhan27]

Well, how should I put it? I'm glad you wrote this...I guess that's how I would put it...

"She knows her strengths/and strengthens her weaknesses"...that sets the scene perfectly...another winner :)

[Destinyxi]

Why are you glad I wrote it? Ya weirdo :P

Glad you liked it Steve!

[kublakhan27]

Now I wouldn't be near as much fun to talk to if I wasn't so cryptic, right Kels? :) You're welcome^^

[Destinyxi]

Psh but you know I like directness smarty

[kublakhan27]

Well it's not that big a deal really haha it's just a different angle for you...I was just wondering if you'd write something like this...that's all lol

[Destinyxi]

Haha, ah I see :P That wasn't so hard to say now was it? xP

[kublakhan27]

Haha no not at all :P

[Destinyxi]

Thought so ;)

[kublakhan27]

;)

[Crazy Cat Man]

Awwwww hahahhahahaha brilliant. ur very good with metaphors. with flakey boys u used cars. and this one u used "lady and the tram" hahahahaha yup yikes. Ive been with a few women like these. when i realized i was being played i ended it. but also she doesn't care cuz shes got other men groveling at her feet lol i dont need that. great poems as always

[Destinyxi]

Haha, yeah I enjoy using metaphors :) I don't know where I came up with the title, probably because I went to Disney yesterday loool.

Thanks for the review!

[Crazy Cat Man]

u went to Disney world? lol....i didn't like it when I was a kid.......cuz i was spoiled by Kings Dominion ( an amusement park in VA ) and the rides are fast! so as a kid i hated Disney world...i wanted fast rides!!! :P I hated Splash Mountain...theres a funny of me and my brothers mad, and behind us u see happy white kids lol

[Destinyxi]

I went to the Magic Kingdom in Orlando haha. I liked it. I can't handle fast rides at all, I liked the kiddy rides :P I'm such a baby when it comes to that.

[Crazy Cat Man]

well i now changed LOL...at the beach me and my brother went on that ride the Zipper which is a fierce ride which makes u go upside down fast lol and i couldnt handle it anymore..its been 8 years LOL so my body was not used to the butterflies anymore lol

[Destinyxi]

I've never been able to handle the butterflies. Two years ago I went on this baby roller coaster, I swear to god I almost died. Freaking woody woodpecker

[Crazy Cat Man]

LOL awww........after the Zipper me and my brother to one of thise little cup rides and that was scary for me.....wow i changed ...he saw how nervous i was..im shocked that i got scared...i used to be a speed demon...afterwards we went for a beer to calm down :) that felt relaxing

[Destinyxi]

yeah that sounds relaxing haha. Though I'm not a fan of beer, I'm a typical Italian, hand me the wine :P I've never been on the cups, dont they spin?

[Crazy Cat Man]

Awwwwww I love Wine too :) very classy. do drink with ur pinky out ? :P yes the cups spin.....im ashamed that i got scared even on the cups!!!!

[Destinyxi]

No, I don't think I drink with my pinky up.. damn I'll have to see. I hope I dont! haha

[Crazy Cat Man]

are u at the beach now? with a laptop? reviewing works? lol

[Destinyxi]

I'm in the hotel haha, it's storming outside. And yes I brought my laptop with me :P

[Crazy Cat Man]

Awwww storms.......sucky.....i got rained on when i was at the beach.....i ended up buying new clothes......i went to the beach dressed as a hipster,,then i ended up buying prep clothes :P

[Crazy Cat Man]

if was u......when the storm clears...u should take ur laptop outside on the beach.....next to the water......that sounds like a good idea right? :P

[Destinyxi]

Haha, yeah you told me about the prep clothes thing. And no way am I bringing my baby onto the beach, it might get ruined. I'll probably just bring a notepad or something :P

[Crazy Cat Man]

i bring with me a notepad sometimes :P thats how i wrote the "bad guys always win" poem :P...so u will never know when inspiration will come from :D

[Ian H Morrison]

this is funny but really well written as allways the meter is great and the stanzas wonderful brilliant

[Destinyxi]

I wasn't trying to be funny :P Thanks Ian! :)

[Ian H Morrison]

you are welcome hun xox

[koty bell]

ive dated a few like this lol nice work:)

[Destinyxi]

haha there are plenty like that, thanks for the review!