Worlds Wetness

Worlds Wetness

 

Wipe away the memories

Our memories

Clean my insides

My outsides

 

Surround me with your heat

Your invisible boundaries

Close in over my head

Till it’s nothing but you

 

Take me for a ride

Take me deep inside you

Pull me away from here

Away from reality

 

I’m wishing and I’m hoping

As I write down these words

How many times I sat here

Pen and paper

 

How big you seem

How small I feel

How you carry the wind

Into my soft, long tendrils

 

You make breathing easier

You make seeing clearer

I breathe you in

And you clear my lungs

 

You’re such an escape

I use you as I please

And you have no say

But you’re always there

Always here

 

And I’d drown

I’d drown in you

My escape

My breath

My water

My ocean 

Author's Note

For those who don't know, I'm in Florida on Vacation. I've had a rough year, a lot of events jumbled up and hit me all at once. So to be here in Florida, after 10 years of continuously coming here, is one hell of a relief.

(The picture is an actual picture I took of the sunset here)
Enjoy!!

Reviews

[Kes]

Wow - the picture's fantastic! lol And so is the poem, of course. For some reason, I feel you should just rate all of your poems mature... lol they just seem to come across that way! Not that I'm complaining at all! :)
Great work.
K

[That_Girl]

"I breathe you in and you clear my lungs" Love that! Really good poem. Relax and enjoy yourself! :)

[axel]

good poem

[EmeraldFacet]

I Loved This!

[C.]

I really liked this (:

[Coyote Poetry]

"My escape
My breath
My water
My ocean "
I like the photo and the description of the ocean. I love to spend time by the sea. No better place to find peace and calm. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[The Flame of the Knight]

Hmm.... Very interesting. This is a good poem. I like it.
(p.s. Great picture)

[Crazy Cat Man]

Nice one babes. I just came from the beach in Ocean City, MD. it felt kind of good. i loved the breeze, i felt some inner peace from the crazy life of busy NY. wow u sent this read request at the right time so both and appreciate the serenity of this poem :)

nice pic

[Destinyxi]

Haha, thank you very much. It feels good to write about something other than men and romance :P

[Crazy Cat Man]

Haha seems like most of my writings have been about women and bad romances :P :/

[Destinyxi]

eh guess were similar in that case hm?

[Crazy Cat Man]

Just a coincidence for the moment :). I think the majority from my works are about relationships. But ill post some new works that are not about dating :D

[Destinyxi]

Sounds good xD that's what I've been trying to do

[Crazy Cat Man]

My advice is to think about what else is on ur mind besides boys lol. Family and money is on my mind so I'm gonna write about that :)

[Destinyxi]

Thanks for the advice! =D

[Crazy Cat Man]

Anytime youngin' :)

[kublakhan27]

This is an awesome poem Kels...I love this :)

[Destinyxi]

Thanks Steve :)

[kublakhan27]

My pleasure :)

[Ian H Morrison]

love it a clever use of wording to make an interesting poem that is a joy to read

[Destinyxi]

Thanks Ian =P Glad you enjoyed it!