Adios Beach

Think outside the box, what sounds similar to beach?

Adios Beach

 

So you have a problem, honey?

My words getting to you?

You’re jealous of my talent

The way I play with letters

 

Good for you darling,

I’m f*****g glad

You’re a fool to insult me

Out of pure and utter jealousy

 

You can’t keep what isn’t yours

So get mad at me

Because he wants me

And not you

 

I don’t blame him

He’d be a fool to keep you around

Any longer than he already has

You and your pretty face

But foul mouth

And dull personality

 

Step aside, sweetheart

Let me finish what you started

Unable to keep a man by your side

Unable to keep him interested

Well let me show you how it’s done

B***h

 

Your insecurities will eat you alive

Leave you with nothing

But skin and bones

Put on that fake smile for the world

But I see through it

I see your gums rotting around your teeth

Your eyes are nothing but sockets

You’re so damn pretty

Rotting away because of him

Desperately trying to hold on

 

Do me, you, and him a favor

Let go

Grow up

Where’s your pride?

He doesn’t want you

Find someone who does

Why waste your time, babe?

 

Let him be

Let me take over your job

The job you messed up

The job where he doesn’t have the balls

To fire you from

So let me have the honors

Of firing your flat, obnoxious a*s

 

Fly away pretty skeleton

Fly away

For the next lion

To eat and chomp away at your bones

 

Sayonara chickita 

Author's Note

Written out of pure anger. And I swear to god I hope she reads this.

Let me know what you all think! :)

Reviews

[Kes]

Haha, I hope so too. :P This is a really strong poem - great work!!
Keep writing!
K

[Lumière Dé..]

let it out. ( I have the strongest urge to end that sentance with 'sister' xD )
I have felt the EXACT same thing. Still standing strong..... hehe, I hope she reads it too :D

[C.]

I think this one is really good as well. I went through pretty much the same situation with a girl and the guy I had just started dating and even though we broke up a while ago, she's still mad at me for it, haha. It's pathetic actually, but oh well. I can't do anything about it.

[Mazie Tackett]

wow scary

[afra]

i enjoyed reading this so much ...well done

[axel]

nice poem writing,i like it.

[Destinyxi]

Thank you :)

[John Stussy]

Wow, I can feel the anger!! I'd say make damn sure she sees this, hell give her a signed copy to read every night before she goes to sleep haha. Great strength in this one, go get your man. :P

[Destinyxi]

Haha, I bet you can feel the anger :P I was raging when I wrote the poem.

[John Stussy]

Well, I enjoyed you raging poetically. Your words never fail to instill emotion, stir thoughts, and thoroughly entertain.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Hahahahah! I can't stop laughing right now! When I read the title, I didn't think of a literal beach. So I must think out of the box automatically ;D I love this and I think she needs to forreal read this. I wish I could write my anger as great as you do Destiny. Haha! The guy needs to be with you anyway, you seem like a great person and whomever the girl is probably is dull and not his type. I actually have a poem called "Shotgun Loaded for the Barbie" it's sort of like this :D out of pure anger and made a lot of my audience laugh! I guess it could be a humor poem. Ha. Bravo, for scaring away the girl that tries stealing your man! ;D

Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

[Destinyxi]

Your poem was awesome too haha. Made me laugh :P

I'm glad you liked this poem! =D

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Why thank you very much! :D and I'm glad that it made you laugh. And of course I did :)

[Mr. Lou]

Good piece. The word create a real emotion of hate and superiority as you read along. Its very brutal and honest of a woman's thoughts. I don't understand the title though. Are you saying beach as to refer to the humorous use of the word b***h? and if you are it would have been better if you would have said b***h. It sets up well with the brutal thoughts of the poem.

[Destinyxi]

I made it a rule to never use swear words in my titles. I always spell them as something else. I have many younger readers who are unable to read most of these poems because of the age rating so I tend to not use curses in my titles :P

But yes, beach is supposed to be b***h.

[Mr. Lou]

ooooh. I see. Very thoughtful.

[That_Girl]

Damn girl! I hope she reads it too... sounds like she needs to. ;) And also, you are gorgeous WITH a great personality... of course he'd pick you. :D Great poem! Love it as usual!

[Destinyxi]

Awww... thank you haha. You're really gorgeous too, I saw your new picture. Was shocked x.x

I'm glad you liked this poem =D

[That_Girl]

Awww you're so sweet. ^_^ Thanks!

[Destinyxi]

You're very welcome :)