Adios Beach

Think outside the box, what sounds similar to beach?

Adios Beach

 

So you have a problem, honey?

My words getting to you?

You’re jealous of my talent

The way I play with letters

 

Good for you darling,

I’m f*****g glad

You’re a fool to insult me

Out of pure and utter jealousy

 

You can’t keep what isn’t yours

So get mad at me

Because he wants me

And not you

 

I don’t blame him

He’d be a fool to keep you around

Any longer than he already has

You and your pretty face

But foul mouth

And dull personality

 

Step aside, sweetheart

Let me finish what you started

Unable to keep a man by your side

Unable to keep him interested

Well let me show you how it’s done

B***h

 

Your insecurities will eat you alive

Leave you with nothing

But skin and bones

Put on that fake smile for the world

But I see through it

I see your gums rotting around your teeth

Your eyes are nothing but sockets

You’re so damn pretty

Rotting away because of him

Desperately trying to hold on

 

Do me, you, and him a favor

Let go

Grow up

Where’s your pride?

He doesn’t want you

Find someone who does

Why waste your time, babe?

 

Let him be

Let me take over your job

The job you messed up

The job where he doesn’t have the balls

To fire you from

So let me have the honors

Of firing your flat, obnoxious a*s

 

Fly away pretty skeleton

Fly away

For the next lion

To eat and chomp away at your bones

 

Sayonara chickita 

Author's Note

Written out of pure anger. And I swear to god I hope she reads this.

Let me know what you all think! :)

Reviews

[Becky]

Woah.

Yeah, that's all I can say. Written out of pure anger? Yeah, I can tell. Simple, yet powerful. Great write.

[Destinyxi]

Yeah, I get the feeling many will have the same reaction to this poem xD

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the honest and directness of this poem. Sometime good to release bad thoughts on a sheet of paper. No weakness in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Destinyxi]

Haha, thank you Coyote :)

[kublakhan27]

Wow...this worries me, the situation I mean...the poem is great, though if you didn't mention the pure anger, one "might" actually find the style of it (not your situation) comical just cuz she's getting such an unequivocal telling-off haha...it definitely has an angry vibe above all else, but hopefully you don't mind the possibility of that interpretation...the title kind of lends itself to that too :)

I hope the rest of the summer treats you better...I hate to see you engulfed in such a malaise for as long as it's been...

[Destinyxi]

Haha, my poetry is how I relieve my frustration/emotions :P

That's why I'm looking forward to Florida. 3 more days of this then I get to relax and forget about the drama. It'll be good for me.

[kublakhan27]

I'm sure it will :)