House of Arms

Formatting is a bit different, let me know what you think!

House of Arms

 

I don’t know

What we are

What we should be

What we could be

 

What I want us to be

 

Spell it out for me

I’m so sick

Of constantly guessing

 

Having high expectations

 

I don’t want to think

Of what you make me feel

What you make me want

 

How much you make me need

 

I close my eyes

And you’re there

You’re everywhere

I close my eyes

And you’re there

On my skin

Under my nails

Inside my eyelids

I shake my head

Trying to shake you out

 

It’s so damn impossible

 

Why do you frustrate me

To the point of insanity

It’s so unhealthy

I’m always so sure

 

Now I’m so lost

 

Find me

Follow my trail

Lead me back home

 

Back to you

 

You’re so impossible

Stop confusing me

Why don’t you simplify

 

Spell us out for me

You

Ess

Us

Then explain the meaning

Remove my confusion

And carry me home

Reviews

[That_Girl]

Ugggh this completely encompasses my current situation... perfectly. I think the format works really well... it still flows and reads easily. :) The last three lines are gold... nice way to end this poem. As always, wonderful job!! I hope everything works out!``

[Destinyxi]

Phew, it's a relief the format works haha. I'm glad you liked this poem! I hope it works out too, thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Felt like listening to a quiet and private conversation. I like the question and the desire of this poem.
"Remove my confusion
And carry me home"
Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Destinyxi]

I'm glad you liked this poem =D thank you for your reviews!

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

Such a reminder of how I felt in the beginning of so many relationships...well, what I was thinking was, but not sure...thus the feelings. Wonderful write.

[Destinyxi]

Haha yes, you're bang on with what this poem is about :) Thanks for the review!