Burning Dreams

Burning Dreams

 

So you wanted more than I could give

You want something else

Something with more fire

If I were to let go, honey

You would get burned

 

You think to find better, find a stream of fireworks

Baby, be careful and don’t get burned

With the little balls you have

Running away when you want more

Instead of waiting for it to happen

When you can actually handle it

 

That’s alright, it’s not me you’re hurting

But do me one little favor

If you want to cut yourself out

Walk away from this wildfire

Then get the

F**k

Out

Of

My

Dreams

 

I don’t know what your plan is

I don’t know what you’re hoping to accomplish

But when you decide to pick up

Your s**t

And go

Go all the way

Not just halfway

Not just quarter way

Go completely and utterly

Take all of your wimpy a*s and leave

 

I don’t need you hanging around in my dreams

Knocking on the walls of my mind

Having my eyes flutter while I’m sleeping

Trying to get you out

 

I don’t need that

If you have something to say

Tell me when I’m awake

When I’m fully aware of your coward a*s

When I can show you

Just how fast

I can burn you

Which is what you wanted right?

More fire?

More flame?

I’ll show you fire and flame

 

I’ll show you what it feels like to get third degree burns, baby

Author's Note

Getting led on and let go isn't the funnest thing.

I've been having dreams about the guy who did it, or what I consider nightmares. I wake up from these nightmares more tired than I did when I went to bed the night before. As a way of trying to rid of all my bottled up anger, I wrote this poem.

Don't forget to check out the picture!

Let me know what you think :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Which is what you wanted right?
More fire?
More flame?
I’ll show you fire and flame"
Great flow of words and i like the emotion and the desire in the words. Would be good to heard with verbal poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Destinyxi]

Haha, I like that part too. Though I have to admit, my favorite part was the last line :P Thanks for your reviews

[John Stussy]

Did you edit the pic yourself? It's pretty good work, I like it.

Being led on is such a pain, it's wearying and quite frankly, infuriating. I'm glad you write to get all the thoughts out of your head, it's a great release. Let your fire burn as brightly as possible, it'll keep those not worth the time and effort away, too hot to be able to get close enough to hurt you at all. Dragons will come, men who aren't slinking lizards hiding under rocks from the the sun. Dragon's can't be burned. I hope this guy leaves your thoughts and dreams soon, he ain't worthy of them. Keep up the incredible work, a pleasure to read as always!

[Destinyxi]

Haha yeah I edited it myself. So glad you liked it!!

[John Stussy]

And I'm glad you posted it. I'm looking forward to more!