Hookers Wings

Hookers Wings

A Poem by Destinyxi
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Another poem written late, tell me what you think! I tried having some sort of format with this one haha

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Hookers Wings

 

She’s got the body of a hooker

And the face of an angel

You let your hormones take over

Wanna turn the good girl bad

 

Honey, behind that face

Is only bad

You think you ache now?

Wait a few more minutes

You’ll be bursting at the seams

 

You can’t corrupt the corrupted

She’s got tricks up her sleeves

And secrets under her clothes

Questions in her eyes

And answers outlining her lips

 

Sweetie, behind that smile

Is one big grin

You think she’s hard to resist now?

Wait a few more minutes

You’ll want to devour her

 

You can’t dominate the dominant

She has power over you

And strength in her petiteness

Landscapes in her curves

And heaven deep inside her

 

She’s got the body of a hooker

And the face of an angel

You let your hormones take over

Wanna try the good girl gone bad

© 2012 Destinyxi


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Kes
This is sassy and classy, and I love it. :P
"You can't dominate the dominant" is, I think, my favourite line. There's something kinda foreboding about it.
Great work. :)
K

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem's got a wallop of attitude in it, but still retains its seductive feel. Quite a good poem, I'd say, you captured an irresistible good girl gone bad perfectly. Keep up the awesome work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Destinyxi

12 Years Ago

Haha, most of my recent poems have that hint of attitude =P I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for you.. read more
John Stussy

12 Years Ago

No problem, it was a pleasure reading your work. I hope to read more words from you.
This is awesome! One question though... in the second and fourth stanzas, are you adressing someone as Honey and Sweetie? If so, you'll need a comma after those words. Otherwise, they are fine. :) Loved it!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Destinyxi

12 Years Ago

Corrected, thank you for your reviews! =D
That_Girl

12 Years Ago

Anytime!! :)
Oh God yes. lol I love this. xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


Destinyxi

12 Years Ago

Haha glad you liked it :D thanks for your reviews :3

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Added on July 15, 2012
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Destinyxi
Destinyxi

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