Denials Need

Written at 2:30am, quite hastily, I couldn't get the thoughts fast enough. The poem might be a bit mixed up, but it suits my thoughts at the moment haha. Enjoy!

Denials Need

 

There’s just something about you

Take over my mind

Take over my heart

I can’t quite put my finger on it

 

I’m in denial

I don’t feel

I don’t want

But damn I’m starting to need

 

A little taste here

A little taste there

A little touch here

A little touch there

A smile

A laugh

A wink

And a kiss

Now I’m hooked

 

I don’t want you

I don’t feel you

I need you

You’re taking me over

Making me insane

 

It’s all about you

Your voice

Your smile

Your eyes

And your scent

 

It’s not enough

It’s never enough

Jumbled thoughts

Mixed feelings

I want

I don’t want

I need

I don’t want to need

I’m yours

You’re hers

I’m his

You’re mine

 

You feel me

You want me

You need me

Come get me

I dare you 

Reviews

[That_Girl]

The jumbled thoughts make this quite appealing. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Jumbled thoughts
mixed feelings
Nice write.

[bitstring]

A bit chaotic, I must say. But it shows your true feelings, and it shows them in a very good way. And the end... comes paired with that misty, passionate look. Love it.

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Thanks for sharing. In a few words you expressed the mixed feelings in an impossible or forbidden relationship. Wobbly feelings, words racing fast. Quickly disappearing like a denial.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. The mind can trick us to wanting things we may not need. I like the flow of thoughts and the very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote