Suprise

Suprise

A Story by Destiny Dewey
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Amanda sees a man she hopes to take home, but soon regrets that decision.

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He is so gorgeous. Thought Amanda, as she watched “him” from across the bar. He was tall, muscular, and handsome. In other words, he was perfect.

            Amanda leaned over towards the bartender. “What’s his name?” She asked, pointing. The bartender smiled. “You know, you’re the third girl to ask me that tonight?” Amanda laughed. “Can you blame me?” “No, can’t say that I do.” He chuckled. “I think his name’s Mike. Mike Pretzel or somethin’.”

            Across the room, “Mike” caught Amanda’s eye and smiled flirtatiously. “Well, now you have to go over there.” Encouraged the bartender. Finishing her gin and juice, Amanda stood up, adjusted her top, and led herself through the crowded room.

            When she arrived at his table, “Mike” extended his hand and smiled. “Mike Preston. And, you are?” Preston, not pretzel. “I’m Amanda.” She flashed her freshly whitened teeth. “No last name?” He asked “Well, not unless you’re willing to give me yours.” She winked. Mike laughed. It was a whole hearted laugh, and he seemed to shake the floor with it.

            As the night progressed, Amanda found herself more and more interested in Mike. Not only was he physically beautiful, he was also very funny. Drink after drink, Amanda felt excitement bubble inside of her, waiting for the bar to close. When the bar closed, they would be left with a choice. And she certainly knew what she would be choosing.

            When the time came, Mike chose the same as Amanda. On their way back to her apartment, Amanda couldn’t wait to tell her girlfriends about her amazing catch.

            When they arrived, the rooms turned hot and steamy. First the living room, through the kitchen and into the bedroom at last. Clothes were discarded and the windows steamed. But just as the evening climaxed, Amanda felt something very odd. Something she had never felt before. Love? She wondered. No, something else… As he pulled away, his face was red and he said “I really have to go.” Amanda tried to grab him but his pants were on and he was gone. Disappointed and confused, Amanda headed for the shower alone. But when she got there, she found something most unpleasant.

            Looking down, she reached to wipe the ejaculation away from her thigh. But instead of the sight she expected, she saw hundreds of tiny spiders.

            Amanda screamed. She knew that that feeling was, and it was crawling around inside of her. As she squirmed and tried to wash away the disgusting and terrifying creatures, they reacted poorly to the hot water. They bite down hard, and she began to feel woozy. As Amanda collapsed, she tried to cry out, but her breath was gone, and so was her life.

© 2015 Destiny Dewey


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Destiny Dewey
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