I wish I could remember

I wish I could remember

A Poem by <3Destiny<3

I wish i could remember that first day.
first hour, first moment of your meeting me.
if the bright or dim the season it might be
summer or winter for aught i can say
so unrecorded did it slip away
so blind was i to see and to foresee
so dull to mark the building of my tree
that would not blossom yet for many a may
if only i could recollect it such
a day of days! i let it come and go
as traceless as a thaw of bygone snow
ut seened to mean so little meant so much
If only now i could recall that touch
first touch of hand in hand Did one but know.

© 2010 <3Destiny<3


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i really really really like this

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love it. I've had this same wish, wanting to have a memento for the future or an inkling /of/ the future on the first meeting. "so unrecorded did it slip away// so blind was i to see and foresee"........"if only i could recollect it such a day of days!" -->especially liked those lines, and the comparison of it being "traceless as a thaw of bygone snow". It's special.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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