Redemtion

this is a poem about the end of times

The thunder rolls,

the earth shakes,

oh dear it's an earthquake.

People screaming,

no one's dreaming,

'Redemtion' time is drawing nigh.

 

A sound in the distance,

it's a trumpet so loud,

with eyes to the sky,

wondering ''Is this all in my mind?''

Then a man said with a shout ''Look there's a shine!''

and then he suddenly died.

Everyone steped back,

some started to fret,

wondering who would be next?

 

They started to run ,

to find somewhere to hide,

for the light above,

was getting bright.

The trumpet blew louder,

and the earth shock even harder.

confusion everywhere,

as the darkness disappears.

 

The righteous were rejoicing,

for there savior was coming,

to take them to that place,

where there'll only be the sun.

No darkness at all,

just a bright happy place,

that's where they'll stay,

untill the end of day.

 

For the unrighteous,

It’s a different story.

for them this was a nightmare!

The brighter it got,

the worst it became,

the earth felt as if it was,

breaking into two.

Trying to keep steady,

they fell to the ground,

the righteous they didn't mind,

for it was the end of time,

but for the unrighteous,

they only fell and died.

Author's Note

this just came to me and I just started to write

Reviews

[Forest Green]

Intriguing...rapturous in a spiritual kind of way.

Good work...

Daniel