Fatal Love

Fatal Love

A Poem by DestinyRhymes
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a poem from a broken heart ... poisonous one side love

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Love …

An emotion so powerful that needs two hearts to hold it together

So magical creating never land till' forever

 

Alone I stand to face it I can't

For I am weak in need of a hand

 

The desire of you when I am lost in your eyes

The thirst of thinking about you that never lies

 

The silent cries that drown me in tears

And knowing that I am not yours fills me with fears

 

My begs and pleads in my prayers a day

Are thousands most repeating what I say

 

Asking for your love, protection or a sign

Your happiness even though you are not mine

 

Unlimited stabs behind every word you declare

The gasps I make when I am out of air

 

Pure love is in my mind poisonous echo

The only cure for me … is to let you go

 

Far away you fly up the sky … you will be fine

You left me the memory of loving you till the end of time

 

© 2011 DestinyRhymes


Author's Note

DestinyRhymes
wrote it on 7th Feb 2011

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This is sad and beautiful at the same time. The bold lettering is a little distracting while reading. But, that's just me being picky.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so heart breaking and bitter sweet. The sweet strong emoiton of love mixed with the tortured pain that is unrequited love. I really felt for you. Great write

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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