Broken

We are broken, there's no doubt about it.

We are broken. 
No doubt about it.
But in spite of what life has tossed us,
We have proven that we can make it.
We may not be able to completely fix ourselves,
For there will always be the telltale signs,
But we can make the pain bearable.
We can find solace in who we are,
In who we were,
And in who we can become.
All of those people who tore us apart,
Who didn't have the decency to treat us as humans,
They won't matter anymore.
Because we may be broken,
But we won't let that stop us from living.

Reviews

[Manda]

Awww I loved this! It was so powerful. You speak such a high level of wisdom! Yet you are so right on what you are saying which makes it all the better! This really speaks the truth in break ups. It should make all who go through it a little bit easier, including me. Im glad I read this! Keep it up!

[xx_strawberry_xx]

Beautiful poem, i love it :D
It's so inspiring.
"But we won't let that stop us from living"

[Lilly]

What powerful and inspirational words you have written here...
Very nicely done - I enjoyed this poem.

[loowzerX]

awesome :)

[nono]

Everyone feels broke sometime in there life. Sometimes broken in so many pieces amongst so many people. And I wonder? Where do I stand when I break or where do I sit? Shattered in so many pieces you have to wonder? This is nice I like the

"No doubt about it"

Letting us know that this poem is full of nothing, but sadness. But what else would you think when reading a poem titled "Broken" This is awesome you did a FANTASTIC JOB ON IT!

[darkgurl]

This is a very powerful write. You express your feelings well

[Brittany W]

this poem is inspirational in ways, it shows that even though we're broken we're still going to live, this was a great poem, nice write!

[Crinkle°]

ouch, very intense. I've already heard some of your words by somebody else. And it reminds me some particular moments... Very nice writing.