Come On, Baby

Come On, Baby

A Poem by Destinee

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And after all these years of being by your side
The first thing that comes to mind is still
“Come on baby, take a bite out of life with me.”

And we joke about it and you tease
But deep down in my old heart I still know 
That was the smartest thing I’ve ever said.

© 2009 Destinee


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This poem sparked in me the wonderful sensation of the genuine feelings of growing up with a person, I don't call it growing old because when you're with that person whose heart your's is entertwined with, it doesn't feel like growing old. This is a beautiful write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the feeling this one gave me, and the smile it put on my face. Very nice picture to go with it, by the way! Fits perfectly! This is what many people look for in life, and I think you captured it perfectly! Good job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a feel good poem. I think this is what everyone wants..to find soul mate to grow old with. Great poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on August 12, 2009

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A Poem by Destinee