hidden frowns.

If I could turn back time, I would.

I'll go back to where we first met,

to when you could help but smile back,

to when we first kiss,

wasn't that a trip?

All the love, passion & happiness soon became lonelyness, sadness & fake happiness.

We built a wall between us & never once looked what was infront of us.

All the anger & hate hiddin inside,

when will this pain end?

Heartbreaks & pain can do alot to a person...

Reviews

[Ice]

"If I could turn back time, I would.
I'll go back to where we first met,
to when you could help but smile back,
to when we first kiss,
wasn't that a trip?"

It shows that you miss being happy...you wish to go back in time where it all happen and try to correct any mistake you've done...but as you move on you continue to be hurt and wonder if you will ever move on with yourself, and the last line explains that the pain you're getting can do a lot to one such as getting depress, angry, and also give flashbacks to one..I always think how can I move on from all the pain I've been delivered too....great writing, Desteny, continue to share your literature... -Poetic Ice