Perfectly Imperfect Me

Perfectly Imperfect Me

A Poem by Dessa

I tried to be perfect

I tried to be everything you wanted me to be
but no matter what I did, it was never good enough
and the more I tried, the more uninterested you become
the more uninterested you became, the harder I tried.

I've learned my lesson I see the craziness of it all

I’m going to stop trying
stop being something I’m not

I’m going back to the unperfected me
the me I was before I met you
when I was happy with myself

I’m leaving you and that fake person behind

I’m coming back to me and all my faults
and I will be happy
with the perfectly imperfect person that I am.

 

© 2009 Dessa


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i liked the message of this poem. i especially liked this line.."i'm leaving you and that fake person behind." also, creative title. well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


i like the flow of this poem. you shouldn't change yourself for anyone and you should be happy with who you are.

Posted 16 Years Ago


"with the perfectly imperfect person that I am."
how charming & witty with such heart-breaking melancholy undertones. as the old saying goes you can't please everyone so you just gotta please yourself. i like how you've come to the realization that you are perfect exactly as you are. it is so easily forgotten in this world now. but each & everyone of us is the 'perfectly imperfect person' we are supposed to be. 2 long-held beliefs in this world that we all realize eventually is: you can't change who you are, & you have to find someone who loves you as you are. great poem with a wonderful, uplifting message.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Dessa
Dessa

Bloomington, CA



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okay I hate talking about myself so this is going to be pretty short. I'm a 25 year old nerd. I like playing video games, reading mangas, and watching cartoons and anime. I like cats, bunnies, and ran.. more..

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