Let me Go

Every word spoken turns to rumbling thunder, the memories we share seem to drift with the wind tell me what do you want from me I’m trying to understand what you are telling me but the harder I try I feel empty inside. The moments we share seem to drift away with the huricane the perfect storm for these dark days I’m trying to please you but it seems useless to try every moment seems to be a lie.

I’m trying to please you but you turn your back from me the sounds of your voice becomes one with the thunder tell me why you taking my life, this silence grows louder than the pouring rain I forgive you, would you forgive me? it’s my time, I want to live. No matter what I do seems to be wrong no matter what I say you act like is unforgiven I’m trying to start my life but nothing seems to go right tell me what you want from me.

Can you hear me talking to you? your ears seem to go deaf every word I say can’t you see this is my life? I’m trying to find my path but every chance I have you take it away I’m trying to please you but you turn your back from me the sounds of your voice becomes one with the thunder tell me why you taking my life, this silence grows louder than the pouring rain I forgive you, would you forgive me? it’s my time, I want to live. I remember the times we used to get along but the older I get my choices seem to be wrong can’t you see that I’m not walking in your shoes? you had your chance to live your life now is my turn to live mine.

Can you hear me talking to you? your ears seem to go deaf every word I say can’t you see this is my life? I’m trying to find way path but every chance I have you take it away. Keep your comments to yourself I don’t need them, don’t need them, don’t need them, no you are afraid to let me go look into my eyes you know I will be fine you have to let me go, I’m letting go. Can you hear me talking to you? your ears seem to go deaf every word I say tell me why you taking my life, this silence grows louder than the pouring rain I forgive you, would you forgive me? it’s my time I want to live my life.

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"I don't need them, don't need them, don't need them, no"
That was powerful. That single line managed to perfectly pull together the distress in the 'voice' of the speaker. This is not something he/she truly wants, but rather something that has to be done. Struggling to be convincing, there is a desire to have things over with regardless of any feelings that may still be present.
I definitely enjoyed this read, keep up the awesome work!

[Mika =^-^=]

Thank you.