Forgotten

Defying my actions

I'm seeking for the lost seasons

Even though it may take years

It is the path that I shall take

That provokes this vivid memories.

 

How many wounds will mend?

How many fates should I take?

Does it have an end?

 

(chorus)

Blood runs through my veins

Like this memories seem to overflow

I am not afraid anymore

So I seek for a better tomorrow

Because I feel you in me.

 

Having washed all of my cold blood

Your name always warmed my heart

Even if I seek for my past

I cannot give in to that life.

 

How many cuts will i give?

How many fates will I repeat?

Do I have a name?

 

(chorus)

Like the birds from up high

I wish I could roam free and fly

I wish to tell you "I love you"

Because you always be in my heart.

 

You taught me how to be myself

And showed me everything shall be okay.

 

The world is full of fantasies

I want to unfolded for you to see

That I seek for a better tomorrow

And I wish to tell you "I love you"

Because I feel you in me.

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

I feel the need to mention many errors in grammar. As I was reading, the errors continually broke the flow for me.

[Mika =^-^=]

Like I mentioned to wordman my English is not that good

[Mika =^-^=]

being not my first language

[Perkele.7885]

That is ok. I like the poem The grammar will come with time

[wordman]

reads like a country song,you are a good writer

[Mika =^-^=]

Thank you :) try my best that English is not my first language haha

[wordman]

not mine either,mine is red neck

[Mika =^-^=]

mine is Spanish

[wordman]

i can speak a few words,you would like angie gonzalez,she is spanisn,her last write was spanish

[Mika =^-^=]

cool :) heh

[wordman]

good to meet you

[Mika =^-^=]

pleasure is mine