Complicated

yeah I hate you but I love you.......

(~^3^)~

 

I always say “I love you”

I wonder if you ever love me too?

Because all you did is laughing

I don’t know if you’re just pretending

 

(ノT‿T)ノ  

 

 

I cried and screamed so loud

Are you deaf not to hear a sound?

You said we’re just fine

for me it wasn’t, you always don’t have a time

 

(ノ>_<)ノ

 

 

There are times you lose your faith

and makes me so desperate

it doesn’t matter how good or terrible you are

I still love you even if we’re at war

 

(ノY_Y)ノ  

 

 

I love you like I always do

I don’t know if you really love me too

I am getting frustrated

Coz babe it’s so complicated

 

 

(ノO‿O)ノ TT *turns the table* 

 

 

Author's Note

waaaaaaaaaaaaah.....(ノ◉‿◉)ノ ┳┳　*turns the table*

Reviews

[Strigoikillerr]

I liked this a lot. Simple and cute ^^
The structure is pretty neat.

[Libby]

The little people as headers are absolutely brilliant. Wish I'd thought of it. All the same, it was an interesting poem with a clear message. c:

[Jack Isaac]

Your poem is so creative (as usual) and of course the love/hate thing is complicated by its very nature. Nice work, but I didn't get the purpose for all the emoticons, and didn't get the ending at all -- yes I'm falling behind the times..lol. Looks like a solid 96. Thanks for sharing this!

[Tomislav Petricevic]

A good poem, but I think the ending should be more powerful.

[Jed Sabffle]

hahaha.. definitely i can relate in this poem because i'm the one on the picture.. hahahahaha xD.
i just remembered the days that we're together.
~nostalgia~ hayy.... T_T

anyway, this is really great. can feel the sincerity in the words.
the words seem to be just voiced out from your heart..
nice work.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Nice flow of thoughts and I like the set-up of the poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Amata Luna]

Nice one Des, you're different emotions in each of the stanza made things different and flowing simultaneously all at the same time. And yes, even if you're at war loving that "one" you're talking about would be just easy. Why? Because it's already in your heart. A job well done once again. Thanks for sharing! :)

[emman]

Oyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy...mag re review ako kahitnapaka lungkot ko ngayon..ang ganda nito..sino kaya tintukoy mo..hmmmm..

[Kuhr Gred]

:) i just remember the song "Complicated" by Avril . . and also contents of your poems really amazing!!.. i like it... :) thanks for sharing
- Kuhr Gred

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

So true, we can't help loving some people,
brilliantly told xD