This is a clever piece of work that says a lot about how most of us subjectively underestimate our own value,a funny, wry poem that explores a real serious subject,the problems of perception and the danger of estimating others without knowing them better . A good poem.
aww.. err. anyare sa review ko?? -_-
oi wag ka nmn ganyan. you should not let others bring you down. but i understand what you're feeling because i feel that way sometimes. but i realize, i must not let self-pity rule over me. self-esteem and confidence is important.
anyway, to my review: you've done an amazing job with this. straight to the point, sincere and heartfelt. very relatable. the rhyming scheme was also great. very beautifully written. :) thanks for sharing!
P.S: You're Beautiful. ♥
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There's an extreme bitterness and emotion(anger?) in this poem...
But I quite agree, sometimes, people tend to compare us to someone who is JUST beautiful and classy...Anyway, don't worry! You have much talent unlike her, whoever she is... :p
Great work...
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I like the rhyming here, and the font style. This poem is something I can relate to, because often I have looked down on myself, felt that I wasn't enough, compared myself with other girls and felt so ugly and unpopular. However, it's important to have self esteem. There's always the bright side of being who you are, it's important to love yourself. So what, you don't wear stylish clothes and hang out with the coolest people? There must be someone who loves your simplicity. Besides, people who are alone most of the time are more thoughtful. Be proud of yourself! I bet she can't write poetry like you haha. Nevertheless, good job, keep writing.
I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^,
errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..