I Hate it....

I Hate it....

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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I hate it because this happiness bring so much pain.....

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I hate it when you stare

And how it leaves my mind so blank

I hate it, it is so unfair

Because I can’t even look back

 

I hate it when you tell your corny jokes

And how it drives me into endless laughs

I hate it when you are teasing me with your pokes

And suddenly left me in the rough

 

I hate when you talk to me

And how that voice makes my heart skip a beat

I hate it when it drives me into my insanity

And when I don’t hear it, I feel so incomplete

 

I hate it when you tap my head

And your fingers playing on my hair

I hate it when you are declaring the “FOREVER FRIENDS”

And how it spoils the mood in the air

 

I hate it when you smile that always surprise me

And how it makes my day so pretty

I hate it to accept it to my heart

The fact that I can only love you from a far

 

I wanted to be with you since long time ago

I hate it

Why it must be you?

I don’t get it…..

 

 

I really hate it because you’re the ONLY ONE who caused me so much CONFUSION……..

 

 

 

 

April 29,2012

4:30 pm

 

© 2012 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
Its been a year since I have decided to gave up on him but when he smiled at me that time.... I realized that I still have feelings for him......

I dedicate this to Mr. GREEN

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Some people...dunno why, always have that effect...
terrificly captured :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aww, some people really make our lives topsy-turvy. Where happiness turns into sadness and sweet moments turn into sad endings. You've shared your heart from here and I can just feel the love, the longing, the sadness and the intensity of each line bearing its way straight to a readers heart. You've touched me this day, and explained what I might have been feeling at the moment. A well written piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Those people who make us crazy. I like your thoughts and I could feel your frustration. Love is luck and timing. Need two people wanting the same thing and in the same place. Hard to do. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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