Who Wins it All

A Poem by Desmund Tiny

We are little warriors fighting for their fun

In this situation, you can trust no one

Tell me ladies and gentlemen

Why do we have to be condemned?

Higher ups are cruel puppeteers

Twisting our strings with pain and fear

This is a nightmare not a dream

I don’t want it! Can’t you hear our screams?!

Sickly being played in this wonderland

Our hearts are being tortured by their Master plan

They put poison through me veins

And the grim slowly eats my soul and brain

Conscience has slowly faded

As our heart devoured by hatred

The right and wrong tend to be blurred

With their reason that are absurd

Can’t deny these darkness building up inside

Take it and carry the vengeance until I die

Kill, kill without a second thought

Be their toy, a killing robot

I don’t know if I am going to last

Because everything happens so fast

Only pain I can trust to get me through the day

In this hell, we’ll never get away

Ladies and Gentlemen, I’ll ask this to you again

Who wins it all in this game that is insane?

Who wins it all?!

© 2012 Desmund Tiny

Author's Note

In time of despair... we have our reasons.... (~^3^~)

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Octob3r Star

I love the look and feel of this writing. Very well written. Cheers :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

I love the look and feel of this writing. Very well written. Cheers :)

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Great job!!!
"Higher ups are cruel puppeteers
Twisting our strings with pain and fear
This is a nightmare not a dream
I don’t want it! Can’t you hear our screams?!" -This lines so amazingly powerful. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Great job!!! "Higher ups are cruel puppeteers Twisting our strings with pain and fear This is a nightmare not a dream I don’t want it! Can’t you hear our screams?!" -This lines so amazingly powerful. Good job!

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pinpen

i really like your rhyme scheme, i agree with muse on this as well.

Posted 12 Years Ago

i really like your rhyme scheme, i agree with muse on this as well.

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Muse

There's never a winner in the game of deception. But if it's insanity that you are questioning...how do you define sane? lol

If you are writing about a system of corruption...I couldn't agree with the message more my dear. Great poem..full of emotions, and very thought provoking.

Posted 12 Years Ago

There's never a winner in the game of deception. But if it's insanity that you are questioning...how do you define sane? lol If you are writing about a system of corruption...I couldn't agree with the message more my dear. Great poem..full of emotions, and very thought provoking.

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Coyote Poetry

No-one will win. Games of insanity lead to no-where. I enjoyed the flow and the strong statement in this poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago

No-one will win. Games of insanity lead to no-where. I enjoyed the flow and the strong statement in this poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem. Coyote

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Chris

Life sometimes - hell, MOST times - has a way of reminding you how unimportant we can be ...and it stings.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Life sometimes - hell, MOST times - has a way of reminding you how unimportant we can be ...and it stings.

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Leslie Philibert

A poem with a lot of power, lyrical bitterness, and not only that, but well written too, good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago

A poem with a lot of power, lyrical bitterness, and not only that, but well written too, good work.

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Jed Sabffle

entangled with much protesting emotions
I can feel the hatred, the yearning to be free
and the pain of being abused by the ones in the top of this society's triangle.
Great work! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago

entangled with much protesting emotions I can feel the hatred, the yearning to be free and the pain of being abused by the ones in the top of this society's triangle. Great work! :D

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Amata Luna

Cool Des, I can feel the pain, I can see your heart and even look into your brain. :D Each word is a brand. It seals into one's heart. I'm glad you shared this one. Another masterpiece, openly done through a poet's heart.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Cool Des, I can feel the pain, I can see your heart and even look into your brain. :D Each word is a brand. It seals into one's heart. I'm glad you shared this one. Another masterpiece, openly done through a poet's heart.

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Kuhr Gred

T_T i'm out of time to read this.. but it is perfect.. love it.. 100 for you :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

T_T i'm out of time to read this.. but it is perfect.. love it.. 100 for you :)

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Added on April 9, 2012
Last Updated on April 9, 2012
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Desmund Tiny

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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..