The Dark Side

People put your guns up

And fill this place with gun shots

Get up and shoot that bullet of fate

For all of us in here are desperate

 

Don’t let your heart drown in fright

Live it around, Go on and fight

Get closer, aim to the head

Because it’s hard to find a true friend

 

Come on, shoot right through the soul

Let it go, let it explode

Fire it and let the red rosebud bloom

Petals scattered in the spiral of doom

 

All of us in here are crazy

You can’t deny this dark side of reality

Beat it, get through it

Rush it and break it

 

 

 

The pain will always follow you around

Go run away and it will haunt you down

Author's Note

Monsters are not born...... Monsters are made......

Reviews

[Jed Sabffle]

strong and very moving..
i like the idea very much.. everyone has a bad side
an amazing and powerful poem. :)

[jennifer little]

wonderful poetry great job

[Chris]

I wonder of your "monster"...

[Tomislav Petricevic]

This one is pumped up with energy, and I like it very much! And it's so true.
Great job! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem feel and energy. To shoot weapons into the sky and accept your fate.
"Come on, shoot right through the soul
Let it go, let it explode"
No weakness in this outstanding poem.

[Your Perfect Disaster]

Very true my friend. I like this, it conveys a lot of deep emption and is very well written. IF even my half awake mind can understand this, then it truly is something. :)