My Angel

My Angel

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
"

When she's happy it makes me happy too

"

Devoted heart is filled with jitters

As the moment becomes sweeter

Your sweet smiles indulged me

To a place not so far from reality

 

And yes, you are a real angel

Who saved me from the depths of Hell

When I’m with you, it feels like heaven
I wished this moment will never end

 

Nervousness swept me away

As you came to me and stayed

I feel like I’m floating in the air

As if I don’t have problems to care

 

After that I became so stiff

It’s like I’m in the end of a cliff

I’m confused with my own seriously

And it really drives me to my insanity

 

At that time, I couldn’t speak nor react

Because your simple hug has a big Impact

  

© 2012 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
I dedicate this poem to my two great friends ..... They inspired me...weeeeeeeeeee..... (~^3^~)

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A lovely poem...
terrificly written :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw...So sweet...You're such a good friend, huh...
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awww this is really Gorgeous

Posted 12 Years Ago


:D i give you 100 points for that inspiring poem :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


wew.............................. XD
hahahhahahahah..:D
I just can't say anything.. hahaha xD

Anyway, this is just brilliant.
simple but stunning especially that it is dedicated to us.. XD

And i like the description..
"When she's happy, it makes me happy too."
:DD



Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 13, 2012
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Desmund Tiny
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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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