My Angel

When she's happy it makes me happy too

Devoted heart is filled with jitters

As the moment becomes sweeter

Your sweet smiles indulged me

To a place not so far from reality

 

And yes, you are a real angel

Who saved me from the depths of Hell

When I’m with you, it feels like heaven
I wished this moment will never end

 

Nervousness swept me away

As you came to me and stayed

I feel like I’m floating in the air

As if I don’t have problems to care

 

After that I became so stiff

It’s like I’m in the end of a cliff

I’m confused with my own seriously

And it really drives me to my insanity

 

At that time, I couldn’t speak nor react

Because your simple hug has a big Impact

  

Author's Note

I dedicate this poem to my two great friends ..... They inspired me...weeeeeeeeeee..... (~^3^~)

Reviews

[Pax]

nice and beautiful

[Queen Empress]

Super sweet!!! D-A-N-A!!!

[emman]

Ang galing naman nito.. :)

[Sweets]

That's so sweet :)
Your friends are so lucky to have you ! :D

[closed..acct]

Oh Wow this has a personal depth to it. Such a heartfelt write,
I can feel this tug on the heart. Wonderful write.

[Layla Anne Massaro]

so great of you to make a poem for them, beautiful.

[Chris]

Caring is when there are no words to define feeling... just pale approximations

[Geraldine]

Aww this is so sweet. ^^ Hurray! for your friends and very well done for your tribute to them. :D This is beautifully written.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the positive and hopeful poem of friendship. Good friends allow us to show whom we really are. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tomislav Petricevic]

A great tribute to your friends! God knows we wouldn't be able to function properly without them. :)