Into the Abyss

why is my sin is my very existence? Why?

Is it a sin to be true?

Is it wrong to express everything I feel?

Don’t I have my own will

Nor have the right to know the truth?

 

I face this world of hallow

My sin is my very existence

And my punishment to live in grim presence

And my soul is a prisoner of sorrow

 

I’ve been taken by the black wings

And thrown into the pit of misery

All I can hear is the symphony of their screaming

And it drives me into my worst insanity

 

I have lost all that I have, everything

There’s nothing left in me

Darkness has swallowed my heart, I feel so empty

Here in abyss I die endlessly

Author's Note

a result of my random mood.....

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

I like the diary entry look to this poem and it's so fitting for the mood. Is it a sin to be true?... such a good question... it seems the best answer is "yes" when so many others need you to be false. I hate when that happens, but I love this poem.

[Regrets]

Very sad but still a wonderful write.

[Jordan's Back]

This is very sorrowful.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awwww, so sad really. I can relate... but yeah, bad things that happen can make us feel like this. I've been broken down so many times.. but you know, I realized.. the bad things that tortures us is what makes us stronger. Though it's so difficult to see because the bad stuff makes us emotional, we're blind to see what we can do about it. Hope you'll be okay. Cheer up? =)
I like this write though. I love the darkness.
Thanks for sharing!

[Thea]

Don't take all the bad happenings seriously and I'm sure you'll feel great...Besides we're about to graduate, just enjoy and understand the circumstances...Nice poem.
:)))

[rwar ish me]

this is very emotional,
Very well potrayed.
A very good write.
~Amai

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Terrificly written...
emotions potrayed real well....can feel that despair type mood
super!!