King's Change of Heart

King: Kindness is Pointless

There was once a king full of kindness
Who gave his everything for his people’s happiness
For the sake of his beloved community
he took all the responsibilities

He always consider others first
but they took advantage of him
They’re fools, their hearts are full of greed and grim
They betrayed him, The king was really hurt

He fell on the ground really hard
with his heart torn apart
he stood up and became fierce
The gentleness in his were washed by his tears

King’s heart were tainted with hatred
And the kingdom’s peace had faded
streets are covered with pain
His people are crying and screaming again and again

He was once a very gentle king
Who treasures his people more than anything
But they hurt him really hard
that causes the King’s change of heart

Now, he’s a ruthless ruler
who doesn’t listen to his people’s pleading
he doesn’t care even if they’re bleeding
He cursed everyone to suffer

 

his heart was once full of gentleness

now, it is covered with cruelness

 

Author's Note

Actually.... I don't know... I just write some random topics that comes to my mind.... >3<

Reviews

[WiLL i e]

Unfortunately sometimes age and experience also breed hardness of heart....and it's sad for then gone is compassion. Gaurd against that young friend. Nice work.

[Jack Isaac]

I just like how your poems are works of art, and the words of course are always good poetry. It sure does seem like the good kings finish last, and nobody ever understands "nice"... they only understand strict and mean. Too that's the way they are. But this poem is not mean, but very nice. Thanks.

[Thea]

An astounding topic...I like it...
:)))

[Regrets]

Wow, even if came from a random thought it was amazing. Really nice write.

[Jordan's Back]

This is a Enchanting yet Dark piece,..... Full of fantasy and wonderment. Excellent work!!!

[Sleeping Maiden]

Huh, this was really good. I loved it! Everything seemed so sad...
I like the story even though it's a poem. Nicely done with this one~
Great job!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Maybe random...
but very wisdomatic I find....

Terrific :)

[Jed Sabffle]

I like it!
It is really nice that you created such a wonderful piece in just "random topics that come to your mind"
The storyline is very simple yet it is enthralling..
Great job! :DD