Friendzoned

Friendzoned

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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We're more than friends but less than lovers.

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I didn’t dare to cross the line

Because you’re a great friend of mine

I never wanted to messed up this friendship

Even though my heart desires a closer relationship

 

It will be a bliss, a heaven

If we can be more than friends

But our situation makes me fell so blue

All that I want is to stay right beside you

 

Pretending like I don’t care

But actually, it is hard for me to bear

I want to turn away

But these feelings won’t go away

 

I tried to let go

But my heart doesn’t want to

So I kept in my wallet your photograph

Even though for me it is not enough

 

I guess this Valentines I’ll be alone

Because I am stuck here in the Friendzone

© 2012 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
T~T there's nothing I can do...... hayzzzz....

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The approach of another holiday is surely to inspire many great minds. This was a perfect example. ^^* Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


OWYEAH!! haha... I can relate to this very much... T_T.
And one thing I can tell you: LIFE IS VERY IRONIC.....

The more you want to SAY IT OUT LOUD that you love him/her....
the more you can't...because you want to maintain you friendship.. knowing that if you will say it to him/her... even the friendship can be broken... T_T


Well,, this is very heartfelt... actually... heartbreaking.. haha XD..
I like the word "FRIENDZONE"... new to my ears.. but echoing in my mind.

Another great composition... Keep it up!!!



Posted 12 Years Ago


This is wonderfully expressed..
And be sure im stucked in the samr zone...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh yes Valentines day approaching real soon....
and sucks to be alone...
anyways real nice poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awwww! I can relate so well to this poem. It's so amazing! I love it. I know the feeling. Sometimes it's just how things are supposed to be.. even if you want to be more.. but just can't. It is your choice though. You can risk telling that friend how you feel. But I know you mentioned that you don't want to ruin the friendship.. so sometimes there's nothing you could do.. but just treasure each other that you have this spectacular friendship. =) It can be painful but.. hopefully you won't be too depressed! It's okay. Being friends isn't always a bad thing. Your friend might feel the same for you sometime?

Posted 12 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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