Riddle

Riddle

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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It's not actually a poem but a riddle

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From the beginning until the end of time I am with you
treat me in any way you want



Train me and


You’ll have friends
you’ll make your parents proud
You’ll make your career successful
you’ll be respectable
You’ll have life with bliss



Ignore me and

 

You’ll have enemies
You’ll make your parents cry
You’ll make your career a disaster
Your wont worth a respect
You’ll suffer in disappointment

 

 


You cannot see me but everyone else can

I am the mirror of yourself, your life.

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
when I woke the thoughts keep running through my head.... kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!

just try to guess?

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I'm gonna guess: a conscience?

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'd love to guess but it would be way off...something divine???

Anyways love the riddle, really gets one thinking...brilliant :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


honesty? a guess.....

but amazing poem!!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 19, 2011
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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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