Riddle

It's not actually a poem but a riddle

From the beginning until the end of time I am with you
treat me in any way you want

Train me and

You’ll have friends
you’ll make your parents proud
You’ll make your career successful
you’ll be respectable
You’ll have life with bliss

Ignore me and

 

You’ll have enemies
You’ll make your parents cry
You’ll make your career a disaster
Your wont worth a respect
You’ll suffer in disappointment

 

 

You cannot see me but everyone else can

I am the mirror of yourself, your life.

Author's Note

when I woke the thoughts keep running through my head.... kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!

just try to guess?

Reviews

[AK]

Brilliant riddle, I love riddles? Oh wait, is it your mind, brain or heart? But I'm not sure about the seeing part... Or is it yourself? I'll keep thinking while you can keep writing! xoxo
Akanksha

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You are very clever! I like this...very original. Nice write.

[joshua deathdealer]

Let it out lol nice..xx

[stars are far]

That was so nice
and girl im loving your style in font and colors :D

[Sweets]

That's soo creativeeeee =)

[Me]

great imagery. nice penning

[Raven Starhawk]

Definitely gives me something to think about. ^^* You did a marvelous job penning this.

[Sleeping Maiden]

huh, makes one think. =) to me, it feels like your talking about one's soul(essence)... but i could be wrong.. Trying to act like someone else but your inner self is shown to everyone but you who hasn't seen your inner self? hmmm...
I like this write. ^o^ Great job!

[paparapapa]

Uhm, our values as a whole? :)) I don't know. But great poem anyway. Makes one really think. :)

[Thea]

Don't know.. XD
Personality? Lels...Sabog ako ngyon, la ako maisip... 3:)
Nice poem.. :)))