First

he's not my first man but he's my first love

You were not my first date

You were not my first kiss

You were not the first one who had me
You were not the first man

 

But...

 

You were the first who made me desperate

You were the first who brought me the bliss

You were the first who made me fall on my knees

You were the first man

 

 

You’re my First love

Though probably you don’t know it

 

 

Author's Note

first love...chuchu... honest opinion

Reviews

[stars are far]

this was really sweet ..
i loved most of your writing well done :)

[Layla Anne Massaro]

Nobody will forget everything that happened first in our lives especially love things. Your expressions in this poem is excellent. I enjoyed the whole selection. I am sorry if I haven't reviewed your previews read requests (if ever you sent), I was busy the past months. Keep writing, Desmund.

...Layla...

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awwww... so cute. Love it!! =)
First loves really are something we never forget. ^-^

Such a lovely poem. You made me think of my first love.. lol. Great write!

[joshua deathdealer]

This is so sweet...xx

[Canicus]

A poem many can relate to I'm sure. You did a good job it was sweet

[Draven]

Thats really cute.

[Andrea Vargas]

Lovely (:

[Leon R]

interesting written. I like the construction, definitely enhance the whole feeling.
Good written as well.

[tk]

aww..
that's a very creative and unique way of writing what your heart says.. :) i agree with you very much, first love always remains... ^_^

"You were the first who made me desperate" --> relate much?? XD

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very true and wise poetry written here...
first and best are sometimes the same but most of the time, real love
is rare and can happen any time...

Excellent format and style :)