She's Beautiful

She's really beautiful..... but she doesn't know it

I don’t know why but you’re being insecure
you always think you’re not wonderful

My lady, don’t say you’re ugly

And believe me when I say “You’re a beautiful lady”

My lady, Lift your head up high

There’s no reason for you to be shy

Cheer up as if you were on the highest hill

Being what you are is better than any billion bill

 

 

You don’t need make up

Even if you’re simple, you can catch up
My lady, You’re truly admirable
your looks are so irresistible

 

 

My lady, you’re beautiful holding a bouquet
You brighten up when you flip your hair away
You’re like a princess in a fairytale

Who sings a song like a Nightingale

 

 

To my lady, I will give all the love
and when she smiles for me, it is enough

12/01/11

10:23

Author's Note

She always thought that she was ugly but for me she's the most beautiful lady. I don't want to see cry so I want to make her smile.... I wrote this poem to cheer her up...... ^^, honest opinion....

Reviews

[Thea]

Wow...And who's the girl? (My curiosity is killing me again, lolz!)
A really nice poem...I'm sure if she reads this, she will instantly put a smile on her face...
Maybe, she's just having some troubles in her life but I believe she'll overcome it...
Such a nice dedication...
Great work...

First time toh, ang haba ng review ko! XDDD

:)))

[Lily Mae]

Simply beautiful.. x

[Raven Starhawk]

Such a delightful poem in way of format and structure. It is solid and flows so well.

[Sakib]

It's really an inspiring poem. I liked the flow of the poem too. Great write.

[Me]

This is one of the best poems of yours that I have read

[K.C. Zbryk]

This is a beautiful poem and i hope that it did make her smile. The thought alone left me smiling. It has a nice simple flow and the final stanza was the perfect ending for this. Great work!

[paparapapa]

Aaaw. Girls feel like that from time to time, so we always need some reassurance. And this is a very sweet way for you to tell her that she's worrying in vain. I loved the poem and the format. Thank you for sharing. :)