She's Beautiful

She's really beautiful..... but she doesn't know it

I don’t know why but you’re being insecure
you always think you’re not wonderful

My lady, don’t say you’re ugly

And believe me when I say “You’re a beautiful lady”

My lady, Lift your head up high

There’s no reason for you to be shy

Cheer up as if you were on the highest hill

Being what you are is better than any billion bill

 

 

You don’t need make up

Even if you’re simple, you can catch up
My lady, You’re truly admirable
your looks are so irresistible

 

 

My lady, you’re beautiful holding a bouquet
You brighten up when you flip your hair away
You’re like a princess in a fairytale

Who sings a song like a Nightingale

 

 

To my lady, I will give all the love
and when she smiles for me, it is enough

12/01/11

10:23

Author's Note

She always thought that she was ugly but for me she's the most beautiful lady. I don't want to see cry so I want to make her smile.... I wrote this poem to cheer her up...... ^^, honest opinion....

Reviews

[Thea]

Wow...And who's the girl? (My curiosity is killing me again, lolz!)
A really nice poem...I'm sure if she reads this, she will instantly put a smile on her face...
Maybe, she's just having some troubles in her life but I believe she'll overcome it...
Such a nice dedication...
Great work...

First time toh, ang haba ng review ko! XDDD

:)))

[Layla Anne Massaro]

That is really sweet. You seem to be a good friend. Good piece.

[stars are far]

This is so nice ...
I loved also the use of the red color :D
nice poem :D

[Canicus]

I loved it, way to make someone feel better about themselves, good job

[tk]

like what you've said this morning, this one's for Reyvilyn, right??? Ü
i agree, she's sooo beautiful! most girls admire her long hair, good looks, cuteness, and kind heart. she's beautiful inside and out.. :) you justified her through your poem! i hope she reads this as well! :)

[Shy Girl]

I'm sure that you cheered her up considerably with this piece you wrote for here. The lettering and colors catch the eye immediately, the words are a bonus for the reader :) (they are very well thought out and expressed softly, yet strong at the same time) Such a simple feel better pep talk, but with flare :) I enjoyed this very much. Gave me a smile :)

[joshua deathdealer]

This is really sweet Desmund. I love your work..xx

[Andrea Vargas]

This is so beautiful! I love your passion! she is a very lucky girl to have such a caring man to stand by her side (: well done

[Draven]

Its not bad, but it needs a little work. Mabey try taking out the rhyme in it. That will allow you to express it all more clearly. Rhyme limits this piece.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A beautiful, heartwarming poem....
and insecurities about looks are all too common and can sap away
confidence and all self worth...so having positive friends such like
yourself can only help this girl....
This reads so well...so smooth and flawless, brilliant :)

[BloodyMary]

Beautiful. Just pure beauty in the form of poetry.