Tango

Tango

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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Tango portrays the desire and passion into obsession, Suspicion and jealousy into violent actions, anger and betrayal into broken trust. If there's no trust to each other there's no love.

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You fill my heart with pure desire
you put both my heart and soul in fire
You hold me so tight, all I can feel is the passion
And now you are my greatest obsession
 

Your charms drives everyone mad
You gave your love to the night
You don’t even care whether it is good or bad
You just walk there in the red light

my suspicions lead to my violent actions
Causing me to lose all your attractions
The grim in my heart becomes bigger
as you replaced me with another


I trusted you wholeheartedly

Your attention to be mine only, that’s all I need
But now you have just betrayed me

your flirtatious act makes my wounds bleed

you gave yourself to others which I can’t stand
you let her hands upon your hands
Your soft lips caressing her skin
you do everything you want even if it is a sin


Can’t you hear my heart cries?
this jealousy I feel, I can no longer hide
I was a fool for always believing
when your love is all about deceiving

 

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
I used the genre of the Argentine Tango in this poem..I love ballroom dancing yay.... whew...... I just love it...... hehehe..... honest opinions......

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This poem's main appealing aspect was its sad and touching story's presentation in a spicy form of tango. Very beautiful and wonderful execution of your creation. Well Done!!!!!!!!
The change of feelings your words displayed amazed me the most.
In beginning they showed love..... soon, it changed into regret ... then into plead.... then very artistically into jealousy .... and in the end betrayal.
Superb work with expressions and rhythm.
Good Job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I love all different types of dancing. I like you used tango as a metaphor for a relationship. Well written and a pleasure to read..xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very touching, very well done, very relatable.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A spicy tale, told with vim and vigour! I can see this, in my mind's eye, being read aloud with a tango being danced in the background! Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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i really love this poem!! such intense feelings..! a great write!! :) *A.A.*

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your analogy worked real well!
:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is how I felt three weeks ago when my Ecuadorian romance novel cover of a boyfriend moved to california and met someone almost immediately, but now, I'm in a much happier romacnce :) Anyway, beautiful writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


this was so nice ..
and emotional ..so romantic ...loved that alot :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Me
Very nicely expressed....

Posted 12 Years Ago


good metaphors and similes. i felt the emotion from the poem. well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sorry it took me so long to review this! It's so organized and well done! I've never delved too far into poetry so this is my first time seeing it formatted liek this and I LOVE it! Very cool and well done!! Keep at it!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on November 14, 2011
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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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