I will Remember

I will Remember

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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I once loved you and I don't regret it ........ ^^,

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I remember, we used to watch together the sunset
we always walk on the beach, castle made of sand
we exchange promises, every vows we said
how tight you hold my hands

I remember those sweet whispers “I love you”
how I vanished in your kisses
the weird feeling that tickles
And how much I love you

I remember each fights we made
those misunderstandings and how we became undone
cruel words we throw to each other
Now, our affection to each other is gone

I remember when we said our goodbyes
Each night with endless cries

when you’re not by my side, when we’re apart
it’s hard to deal with the overflowing  pain in my heart

 

I will always remember our love story
I never regret it, don't be sorry

you never missed, you gave me enough

I will always remember that you were my first love.

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
hehehehehe I dedicate this one to mr. K teeeeeeeheeeeeeeee........... ^^,

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such a lovely tribute to a love passed. The emotions that we feel early on in a relationship can not be forgotten, but what we learned during the relationship is even more important. It seems like you grew from this and still cherish this memory. All of this makes this piece wonderful

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This was a lovely poem, very romantic and eye opening..

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice poem... soothing...

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice poem,,this is so romantic i hope he liked it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, this is amazing. I love this poem. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


It was very sweet! I read it over, like, 3 times!

Posted 12 Years Ago


No sense in regretting... The past takes us where we need to be today.. :) xx nice write...xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


Weeh, sino si Mr. K?
Hahaha...Anyway, nice poem...Love it...

Sorry lola kung ndi ako ng-relpy s fb...Medyo bangag pa rin ako... >,<


Posted 12 Years Ago


We all have that certain mr/miss/ms etc etc....haha mr.K.... and we end up reminicing the times...I love how you conveyed this so nicely...Awesome :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Desmund Tiny
Desmund Tiny

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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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