I thought he was mine forever

Yesterday, His love was mine. Now she took it from me.

Yesterday, you were my faithful lover

Now you say you’re in love with her

What the heck is going on?

I thought nothing will break us down.

You said I’m your only girl
but you replaced me with another
I really don’t understand
Why did you let go of my hand?

 

Why did you pretend to mine

And you just left me behind
Can you please explain
because you’re breaking me with pain

I thought our relationship is deep
but your love become shallow
you have changed really quick
you just disappear to me like a shadow.

 

You’ve become the person that I hate

with your sweet words that are fake

with your lies, you left me in misery

I tried to be tough because no one will comfort me

Author's Note

It hurts but there's nothing I can do but to let him go.........I really do love him.......

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

This is tragically beautiful. Great opening and the third stanza was nice. It's does hurt tremendously when we lose someone we love. Whether it be to death or this world. Most of my writes are about this type of pain. All you can do is let him go. Forgive him, forgive yourself and move on. You will grow to deal with the pain and you will meet someone who deserves your love...xx

[rwar ish me]

this is sad. I can relate to this ver well
~Amai

[paparapapa]

Heartbreaking. :| I liked how everything shifted from love to hate. And I can definitely feel the emotions that you felt when you were writing this. Good job. But you should still edit it more since there are a few typos in the poem. Keep on writing. :)