I thought he was mine forever

Yesterday, His love was mine. Now she took it from me.

Yesterday, you were my faithful lover

Now you say you’re in love with her

What the heck is going on?

I thought nothing will break us down.

You said I’m your only girl
but you replaced me with another
I really don’t understand
Why did you let go of my hand?

 

Why did you pretend to mine

And you just left me behind
Can you please explain
because you’re breaking me with pain

I thought our relationship is deep
but your love become shallow
you have changed really quick
you just disappear to me like a shadow.

 

You’ve become the person that I hate

with your sweet words that are fake

with your lies, you left me in misery

I tried to be tough because no one will comfort me

Author's Note

It hurts but there's nothing I can do but to let him go.........I really do love him.......

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

This is tragically beautiful. Great opening and the third stanza was nice. It's does hurt tremendously when we lose someone we love. Whether it be to death or this world. Most of my writes are about this type of pain. All you can do is let him go. Forgive him, forgive yourself and move on. You will grow to deal with the pain and you will meet someone who deserves your love...xx

[Raven Starhawk]

Being on the end of this hurts so much and no matter how it ended it will forever leave a scar on your heart. The pain you experienced is one many can relate to.

[Thea]

Nothing much to say...We've talked about this already...
Great one... :)))

[Rhea]

i can undastan d pain within ur words...... a nice poem which glorifies immense breakdown after experiencing hollow love..

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This is really depressing to read. Even if you love him, you must let go. If his heart has decided to go for another, what can one do? Only life will be the judge of what is to be decided. I felt the pain in your words and the hate at the ending. A great piece but do make the right choice.

[C.A.Jordon]

well written, i felt the emotion that came from the words.

[A Risen Heroine.]

Wow... How I can relate...
Such break up hurts the most..
I hope you're okay...
If he let go of your hand, then he's not worth you tears, and definielt not your love, I promise you; you'll find someone whom deserve you!!

Keep your head held high!!

~A Fallen Heroine~

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

This type of heartbreak aches alooot.....they say time is best healer....true yet never heals completely in my humble opnion....feelings portrayed here so perfectly with perfect flow....brilliant!!!

[Chris]

Lil one... its always the only thing we can do... and always the hardest. Its the rite of passage to "Becoming".

Chris