My feelings remain hidden

I want to tell him everything but words won't come out.

She said that they were meant together

I can’t avoid him forever

What should I say when I see him?

My mind is only filled with grim

 

“I don’t love him” was a lie

But he heard it as I fret

Now all I have is regret

And all I can do is cry

 

How can we be fine?

When I’m running out of time,

This wide gap tears us apart

I didn’t mean to push him so far

 

Even if I tell him everything

I don’t have the words to get it right

For him, I’ll do anything

Because I know he’s my light

 

Words that aren’t meant to be said,

Things I didn’t know he could hear

I want to say I love you so sincere

But I don’t know why I’m so afraid

 

My feelings remain hidden

As I try to solve this riddle

This confrontation so sudden

Now I’m stuck in the middle.

 

 

 

Author's Note

please ignore the grammar problems

Reviews

[stars are far]

this was so great and the hidden feelings kills the person ..
i hate this thind but your poem is amazing and the last stanza's rhyme is great :)

[Jeremy Baker]

Well structured and crafted

[rose with love]

good job, everything is at its place, it flows like it should be and I love the ending. well done

[Carrion.]

Again, I love it.
I admire the first stanza, the last, and everyone in between ^^
goodjob;D

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Taking that step is a big one and is hard and you conveyed that so well, I can feel your angst, excellent :)

[A Risen Heroine.]

This write is filled with sadness..
I can realte to this very well...

Well, if you want to tell him how much you love him; go show him this poem, that's a start...

Very well done and thank you for sharing.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[joshua deathdealer]

Loving this write..Lots of emotions and sadness embodied here..xx