our FOREVER is now OVER

our FOREVER is now OVER

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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there are times that love fades away.........

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Our love is like fireworks display

It fills the night with colours

But all of it slowly fades away

And all that’s left is like a dull silver armour

                                        

Our love is like beer

We are surely drunk together,

With happiness and cheers,

It all ends with a hangover

 

Our love is like a coaster ride

Every turn is crazy, like a joy ride

But now it makes me sick

I realized that we don’t click

 

From your warm arms, I want to break free

I don’t want to pretend my feelings aren’t fading

I don’t want to cause you hurt anymore

I’m sure that I won’t say forevermore

 

Conversations turning into screams

Now our love only bring us pain

It felt like a part of my dreams

And we’re torn apart in the middle of rain

 

We used to share love every night,

Now all we have are fights,

We promised to be together forever,

But now everything we have is over

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
this poem is requested by a dear friend of mine and edited by my bestfriend. please ignore the grammar problems..... ^^,

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Very sad indeed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Rather sad, but very good.
Nothing is sadder to me than the death of love.
Its a rancid experience :(

Posted 13 Years Ago


i loved your title it was soooooooooo amazing
real great work ..( you should have used a greater font size )
great :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


lovely, very nice penned:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I just plain out love it..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Terrific poem love how you metphorise the statements that give it an extra dimension and flow is flawless, wonderful :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love the metaphors in this one..Very well written Desmund..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


love is letting go :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 5, 2011
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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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