A night with Him

He's the only one who makes me feel this way....

A night with him all alone

Thoughts are washed away

Pleasure and pain slowly break me down

In this dim light, I’m getting swept away

                   

How come I feel hot just from his kisses?

His cold fingers set off fevers through my whole body with desire

Every touch makes me feel that my body’s on fire

And it’s choking me as my heart beat rises

           

It’s deafening, this heart’s loud beating

And his breath that’s whispered in my ears

My head starts spinning

 My chest aches with such pain, it causes these tears

 

All I can hear is the pounding of each heartbeat

Being wrapped in his body’s warmth

His heat had melted me before I’d realized it

Lost all my strength in his arms

 

I looked at his eyes and faced him

My mind is filled with him, completely losing my senses

And desperately hang onto him

I’m filled with joy just by his presence

 

Author's Note

Please ignore the grammar problems........

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

I absolutely love this write. Heartfelt and romantic..xx

[A Risen Heroine.]

Kinky poem...
But I liked it a lot! :D
Liked every each stanza, you did a good job on this.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[NightShade]

Don't you just love it when pleasure and pain meld into one tingly bittersweet sensation? Yeah... Stunningly romantic and I kind of blushed while reading it. Good stuff!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Oh yes love does make one feel that way, the 'losing of the senses' 'joy' 'the pounding of the heartbeat' etc etc. Marvellous write, amazing :)

[Symmie]

this is lovely! i really liked the last stanza :)

[K.C. Zbryk]

a beautiful tribute to the way that he makes you feel, and well penned at that.

[kurdapiaful]

kinky :)

[Thea]

So small font, haha! XD
Never mind, like this...
"My mind is filled with him, completely losing my senses"
Lutang ba 'to? XD Haha!
---d♥k--- ^^